Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, trật tự từ và dùng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi cấu trúc như “I very like” → “I really like” và “I have habits is” → “I have a habit of”. Giữ câu dưới 4–5 câu, thêm chi tiết cụ thể (loại ảnh, mục đích chụp) và dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of different views. I usually take pictures when I eat out or when I hang out with friends because I want to remember the moment. Sometimes I take photos when I feel stressed, as photographing helps me relax and reflect. I mostly focus on candid shots and close-ups of food and street scenes.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (plural/singular, verb forms) và làm rõ so sánh bằng cấu trúc hợp lý: “I prefer rural areas because…”. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do (ví dụ: không khí, thiên nhiên) và liên kết câu bằng từ nối như “because”, “so”, “also”. Tránh thừa từ như “Umm” và đảm bảo câu không quá ngắt quãng.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery is quieter and more peaceful, with open fields and trees. Because of that calm atmosphere, I can take clearer landscape photos without crowds. I also like posting these photos online to share the natural beauty with friends.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện tính liên kết và rõ ràng trong ý: trả lời trực tiếp (own country/other countries) rồi giải thích cụ thể. Tránh câu lủng củng và từ không đúng (ví dụ “prefer zoo” không hợp ngữ cảnh). Sử dụng cấu trúc rõ ràng như “I prefer views in my country because… However, other countries also…”. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the landscapes and cultural scenes, which helps me capture meaningful photos. However, I also enjoy traveling abroad since each country has unique architecture and natural features worth photographing. For example, I love photographing traditional markets at home and coastal cliffs when I travel.

× Of course, I very like taking pictures.

✓ Of course, I really like taking pictures.

Use 'really like' instead of 'very like'. 'Like' is a stative verb and 'very' cannot directly modify it in this structure; use an adverb such as 'really' or 'very much'. Suggestion: say 'I really like' or 'I like ... very much.'

× I have habits is taking picture everywhere when I eat, when I hang out with my friends or or when I feel bad or tired.

✓ I have a habit of taking pictures everywhere: when I eat, when I hang out with my friends, or when I feel sad or tired.

Original mixes several structures and has article and noun form errors. Use 'a habit of doing something' to express routine; 'pictures' plural; 'sad' is more appropriate than 'bad' for feelings. Remove duplicated 'or'. Suggestion: 'I have a habit of taking pictures everywhere: when I eat, when I hang out with my friends, or when I feel sad or tired.'

× I prefer view in rural area than because I feel very relaxed and peaceful.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I feel very relaxed and peaceful.

Use plural 'views' and 'rural areas' to match general preference. Remove unnecessary 'than' which makes comparison incomplete. Suggestion: 'I prefer views in rural areas because I feel very relaxed and peaceful.'

× I usually taking photos and post on social media.

✓ I usually take photos and post them on social media.

With adverb 'usually' use base form 'take' (simple present). 'Taking' is incorrect without auxiliary. Also include object 'them' or repeat 'photos' after 'post'. Suggestion: 'I usually take photos and post them on social media.'

× I prefer zoo but I believe each countries also have all beautiful like my countries have hesitate like some home or.

✓ I prefer zoos, but I believe each country is beautiful in its own way, like my country with its lovely homes.

Many problems: 'zoo' should be plural 'zoos' if general; 'each countries' wrong—use 'each country' or 'every country'; subject-verb agreement: 'each country is'; 'have all beautiful' is ungrammatical—use 'is beautiful' or 'has beautiful places'; 'my countries' should be 'my country'. 'Hesitate' is irrelevant. Suggestion: 'I prefer zoos, but I believe every country is beautiful in its own way, like my country with its lovely homes.'