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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think photograph can deceive my feelings and the to remember these memories. So I think taking pictures can.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in rural areas because I think rural areas have different color plants. For example when I see the beautiful flowers and the green trees, it can makes me have more fresh.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Apple provides in my own country because I living in a small town, there are different flowers and the plants so I can get some more fresh air in this place. It make me feel refreshing.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 句子多处语法和用词错误,表达不够自然且重复。回答应先直接回答问题,然后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免冗长或不完整的句子。注意正确使用时态、单复数和固定搭配(例如 “photographs capture my feelings” 或 “help me remember”)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photographs help me capture my feelings and preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets to remember how peaceful the moment felt.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答比较清晰但语法和搭配有问题,细节可以更具体。注意主谓一致(It makes me feel fresh)和形容词/名词搭配(different-coloured plants 或 diverse plant life)。可以用连接词如 “for example” 或 “such as” 提供具体例子并说明感受。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside has diverse plant life and colourful flowers. For example, seeing fields of wildflowers and green trees makes me feel refreshed and relaxed.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 答案不相关且多处词汇错误(如 “Apple provides” 明显错误),句子结构也混乱。应先明确回答(own country 或 other countries),然后说明原因并给出具体细节。注意使用正确的动词形式(I live),名词短语(fresh air)和主谓一致(It makes me feel refreshed)。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I live in a small town with many flowers and trees, so I can enjoy fresh air. This peaceful environment makes me feel refreshed and comfortable.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of nouns / Singular and article

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think photograph can deceive my feelings and the to remember these memories. So I think taking pictures can.

Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think photographs can capture my feelings and help me remember these memories. So I think taking pictures is good.

问题涉及名词单复数和词汇搭配(应属第1项“Singular and plural issue”与第22项“Article errors/word choice”范畴)。原句中“photograph”应使用复数“photographs”与前文“taking pictures”保持一致;动词“deceive”用错,语义不通,正确用词应为“capture”(捕捉/记录)。短语“the to remember these memories”结构混乱,需改为“help me remember these memories”或更简洁“help me remember”。最后一句不完整,补全为“So I think taking pictures is good.” 建议:注意名词单复数一致,使用与语境匹配的动词搭配,避免残缺句子。

Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns / Article and plural

× I prefer views in rural areas because I think rural areas have different color plants.

I prefer views in rural areas because I think rural areas have plants of different colors.

问题为形容词/名词用法和词序(对应第13和第18项)。原句“different color plants”词序不自然,正确表达应为“plants of different colors”或“different-colored plants”。建议:当描述“具有不同颜色的植物”时,可用“plants of different colors”或复合形容词“different-colored plants”。

Subject-verb agreement / Third person singular issue

× For example when I see the beautiful flowers and the green trees, it can makes me have more fresh.

For example, when I see the beautiful flowers and green trees, it makes me feel fresher.

问题包含主谓一致(第27/第2项)与副词/形容词用法(第13/第20项)。原句“it can makes”同时有情态动词和第三人称单数动词错误,正确应为“it makes”或“it can make”。另外“have more fresh”不符合英语表达,应该说“feel fresher”或“get more fresh air”。建议:注意情态动词后用动词原形;主语为“it”时谓语用第三人称单数形式;用“feel + 形容词”表达感受。

Incorrect word choice and structure / Article errors

× Apple provides in my own country because I living in a small town, there are different flowers and the plants so I can get some more fresh air in this place.

I prefer views in my own country because I live in a small town where there are many different flowers and plants, so I can get fresher air in this place.

问题为词汇选择与句子结构(第26和第22项)。原句“Apple provides”毫无意义,疑为拼写或词误,应为“I prefer”。“I living”缺少谓语时态,应为“I live”。“the plants”定冠词不当,改为复数“plants”或“many plants”。“get some more fresh air”措辞冗长且“fresh air”前用比较级“fresher”更自然。建议:检查单词拼写,保证主谓完整并使用正确时态,避免多余定冠词,使用更地道的短语如“fresher air”。

Verb tense / Subject-verb agreement

× It make me feel refreshing.

It makes me feel refreshed.

问题涉及主谓一致和形容词使用(第27与第13项)。动词“make”应与主语“It”一致用“makes”。另外“feel refreshing”表示“使人感到令人耳目一新”的主动含义,正确表达个人感受应使用“feel refreshed”(感到神清气爽)。建议:注意主语和谓语的一致性;选择正确的形容词形式(过去分词作被动/感受描述)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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