Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on producing a grammatically correct, concise answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix common errors (verb forms, articles, word order). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' once to connect reason. Speak in present tense consistently: e.g. 'I like to take photos of beautiful views because...'

Ví dụ: I like to take photos of beautiful views because they help me keep memories. For example, when I see waves on the beach I take pictures so I can remember the feeling and share it with friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with one clear topic sentence and one specific supporting reason. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, remove repeated words). Use a linking phrase like 'because' and finish the thought with a clear result. Keep it under 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because nature helps me relax. For instance, green fields and quiet paths clear my mind and reduce stress, so I feel refreshed after a walk in the countryside.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence and give a specific reason. Improve word choice and sentence flow (e.g. 'views in other countries feel fresh to me' rather than 'fresh to my views for my mind'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so that' to show purpose. Mention a brief example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they feel new and exciting to me. For example, I take photos so I can remember unfamiliar landscapes and share them with friends when I return home.

× Yes, I when I see the beautiful waves I will taking pictures of them because I want to save this good memories in the by the photo.

✓ Yes, when I see the beautiful waves I will take pictures of them because I want to save these good memories in a photo.

The error involves incorrect use of the verb + -ing form ('will taking'); after 'will' use the base verb 'take' (modal/future auxiliary + base). Also 'this good memories' has number and article problems: 'memories' is plural so use 'these' not 'this'. 'in the by the photo' is incorrect article and preposition use: 'in a photo' or 'in photos'. Suggestion: use 'will take' and 'these good memories in a photo.'

× I like nature, so I prefer views in rural areas because I think nature have the power to to make my mind clear and stressed out my stressed and make my.

✓ I like nature, so I prefer views in rural areas because I think nature has the power to make my mind clear and reduce my stress.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('nature have' should be 'nature has' because 'nature' is singular). The phrase 'to to make' repeats 'to' and is incorrect. 'Make my mind clear' is acceptable but 'stressed out my stressed and make my.' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'reduce my stress' or 'relieve my stress'. Also pronoun/word repetition removed. Suggestion: use singular verb with 'nature', remove duplicate 'to', and express stress relief clearly.

× I prefer views in the other countries because it is fresh to my views for my mind, so I want to save them in the photo so I can share with my friend when I get back to my country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they feel fresh to me, so I want to save them in photos so I can share them with my friends when I get back to my country.

Problems include incorrect article and count: 'the other countries' should be 'other countries' unless specific; 'it is fresh to my views for my mind' is awkward—use 'they feel fresh to me'. 'save them in the photo' should be 'in photos' and 'share with my friend' should be 'share them with my friends' (plural or 'a friend' depending on meaning). Tense and meaning preserved: present preference 'prefer' and present-state 'feel' are correct. Suggestion: use plural pronouns consistently and natural collocations ('feel fresh to me', 'save in photos', 'share with my friends').