Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve natural phrasing and grammar, reduce redundancy, and keep answer within 3–4 concise sentences. Correct articles and word order ("a quite a fan" → "quite a fan"; lowercase mid-sentence "A") and avoid repeating the same idea. Add a brief specific example to make it more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'm quite a fan of photography, especially when I come across a breathtaking landscape. For example, on a recent trip to the mountains I took wide-angle shots of the valley at sunrise, which helped me remember the colours and light much better than photos of people would.

Gợi ý: Remove hesitation words (e.g., "uh"), fix grammar and collocations ("the often countryside" → "the countryside"), and use a linking phrase to contrast views. Provide one concrete reason or brief example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer rural views because they feel more serene and peaceful. In contrast, cityscapes can seem cluttered; for instance, I prefer photographing open fields and streams to crowded streets because the compositions are simpler and more calming.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and word choice (add missing verbs: "are much more exotic"; "see everyday" → "see every day"). Replace unclear phrases ("hidden games") with intended words (e.g., "hidden gems"). Use a contrast linking word and give a short specific example of a foreign and a local view.

Ví dụ: I like both, but views in other countries often feel more exotic because the architecture and geography are different from what I see every day. For example, I loved the colorful markets in Morocco, yet my country also has hidden gems, such as dramatic coastal cliffs that are perfect for photography.

× Yes, I'm a quite a fan of photography, especially when I encounter A breathtaking landscape.

✓ Yes, I'm quite a fan of photography, especially when I encounter a breathtaking landscape.

The phrase 'a quite a fan' has an extra article 'a' and misplaces the adverb 'quite'. Use 'quite a fan' with one 'a'. Also 'A breathtaking' incorrectly capitalizes 'A'; 'a' should be lowercase. Suggestion: place the adverb before the article and use correct capitalization: 'I'm quite a fan' and 'a breathtaking landscape'.

× While cityscapes with tall buildings can be impressive, I find them a bit too cluttered uh compared to the often countryside.

✓ While cityscapes with tall buildings can be impressive, I find them a bit too cluttered compared to the countryside.

The phrase 'the often countryside' is ungrammatical: 'often' is an adverb and cannot modify 'countryside' as an adjective. Remove 'often' or place it correctly (e.g., 'often found in the countryside'). Also remove filler 'uh'. Use 'the countryside' for general reference. Suggestion: say 'compared to the countryside' or 'often found in the countryside' depending on intended meaning.

× I like both, but views in other countries much more exotic because the architecture and geography are so different from what I see everyday.

✓ I like both, but views in other countries are much more exotic because the architecture and geography are so different from what I see every day.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to link the subject 'views in other countries' with the adjective 'much more exotic' (copular verb omission). This is an instance of incorrect adjective usage requiring the verb 'be'. Also 'everyday' (adjective) is incorrect here; the adverbial phrase should be 'every day.' Suggestion: include the verb 'are' and use 'every day' as two words when meaning 'each day'.

× However, my home country has some hidden games just like coastal cliffs.

✓ However, my home country has some hidden gems, such as coastal cliffs.

The word 'games' is a typo; the intended noun is 'gems'. Also 'just like coastal cliffs' is informal and awkward; use 'such as' to introduce examples. Suggestion: replace 'games' with 'gems' and rephrase to 'such as coastal cliffs' for clarity.