Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and correct grammar; answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences natural and within five sentences. For example, say you enjoy photographing views because they capture memories, mention where or what kinds of views you prefer, and briefly explain why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. When I travel I usually photograph landscapes and city skylines because they help me remember the atmosphere of a place. For example, I often take sunrise shots to capture the colours, and later I look back at them to recall my trips.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference statement, then support it with specific and coherent reasons using linking words. Avoid unnecessary details about posting to social media unless it supports the point. Use correct tense and simpler sentence structure to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside offers peaceful landscapes and clear views of the sunrise. For instance, when I visit my hometown I often photograph rolling hills and morning light, which create better compositions than crowded city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'province', 'these kinds of views'). Provide a clear comparison with specific examples and a reason why foreign views are appealing. Use linking words and complete sentences without trailing fragments.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes I don't have at home. For example, when I visited Toronto in Canada I was fascinated by the view of the CN Tower and the lakeside skyline, which looked very different from the scenery in my province.

× I'm, uh, really, uh, like to travel.

✓ I'm really into traveling.

The original mixes 'I'm' with 'like to' awkwardly and uses filler sounds. Use present continuous 'I'm really into' to express general preference and 'traveling' (gerund) after 'into.' Replace fillers and streamline the sentence.

× Whenever I do travel, I take a lot of pictures, especially for the views, because I find that the moment need to be captured and can be saved for the future references so that I can look back and check is it.

✓ Whenever I travel, I take a lot of pictures, especially of the views, because I feel that the moment needs to be captured and can be saved for future reference so that I can look back and check it.

Use simple present 'Whenever I travel' (habit). Change 'for the views' to 'of the views' (correct preposition). 'Moment' is singular so verb must be 'needs' (subject-verb agreement). 'Future references' should be 'future reference' (uncountable). 'Check is it' is incorrect word order; use 'check it.'

× Urban areas are really crowded, so I like to take pictures in the rural areas because rural areas have a great landscape for the sunrise.

✓ Urban areas are really crowded, so I like taking pictures in rural areas because they have great landscapes for sunrises.

Use 'taking pictures' (gerund) to express preference. Avoid repeated 'the rural areas'; use 'rural areas' and plural 'landscapes' to match. 'Sunrise' as a general event is pluralized to 'sunrises' when speaking generally.

× I always take pictures back home.

✓ I always take pictures when I'm back home.

Clarify timing with 'when I'm back home' (present continuous for current state) or 'when I go back home.' 'Take pictures back home' is ambiguous; adding 'when I'm' fixes sentence structure.

× Whenever I visited my friend, she helped me to show me the new landscape of beautiful views so that I can capture and post them on the Facebook.

✓ Whenever I visit my friend, she shows me new landscapes and beautiful views so that I can capture them and post them on Facebook.

Use present simple 'visit' for habitual action. 'She helped me to show me' is redundant and wrong; use 'she shows me.' 'Landscape of beautiful views' is awkward; use 'new landscapes and beautiful views.' 'Post them on the Facebook' should be 'post them on Facebook' (no definite article).

× I like the views when I came to Canada because these kind of views are not present in my country.

✓ I liked the views when I came to Canada because these kinds of views are not present in my country.

Use past tense 'liked' to match 'came to Canada' (past event). 'These kind' should be pluralized to 'these kinds' to agree with 'views.'

× I like the view in the Prono as the landmark CN Tower.

✓ I like the view in Toronto because of the landmark, the CN Tower.

'Prono' appears to be a misspelling of 'Toronto.' Use 'because of the landmark' for clarity and include the definite article before 'CN Tower.' Adjust word order to sound natural.

× It is really good whenever I see it. I was fascinated by.

✓ It is really impressive whenever I see it; I am fascinated by it.

Original contains sentence fragment 'I was fascinated by.' Complete the thought with an object 'it' and keep tense consistent: use present 'I am fascinated by it' if the feeling continues, or 'I was fascinated by it' for a past reaction. Also combine sentences for fluency.