Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise: give a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar, remove hesitations and add a brief reason. Use one or two supporting details and a linking word for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often take pictures with my wife when we travel abroad because photos help us remember special moments. For example, we always photograph landmarks and local scenes to look back on later.

Gợi ý: Directly state your preference, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles, verb agreement), avoid repetition and fill words, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside has many natural attractions. For instance, I enjoy open fields and quiet forests, which feel more relaxing than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and fix grammar and word choice. Use linking words to give a clear reason and a specific example, and avoid vague phrases like "very good."

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because we have many natural and cultural sites. For example, my hometown has a beautiful mountain and an old temple that are popular places to visit.

× Yes, I usually do umm, I usually take a picture with my wife when I travel it in other countries because it helps me have a memorable with this.

✓ Yes, I usually do. Umm, I usually take a picture with my wife when I travel to other countries because it helps me have a memorable moment.

Errors: 'travel it in other countries' uses wrong structure and extra pronoun; should be 'travel to other countries'. 'have a memorable with this' is missing a noun after 'memorable' (adjective needs a noun) — use 'memorable moment'. Suggestion: Use 'travel to' + place and pair adjectives like 'memorable' with appropriate nouns.

× Umm yeah when I saw it.

✓ Umm, yeah, when I saw it, I took a photo.

Sentence fragment: 'when I saw it' is a dependent clause and cannot stand alone; it implies a past event so pair it with a main clause using past tense (e.g., 'I took a photo'). Suggestion: Complete dependent time clauses with a main clause and keep tense consistent.

× Yeah, I really love, umm, I really love a rural whales because it have many umm, natural attractions.

✓ Yeah, I really love rural areas because they have many natural attractions.

Errors: 'a rural whales' is incorrect: 'whales' is wrong word; likely intended 'areas'. Use plural 'areas' without 'a'. Subject 'they' must match plural noun and verb 'have' fits plural. Remove unnecessary comma. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'areas' and ensure article and number agreement.

× So it's really a beautiful place.

✓ So they're really beautiful places.

Original uses singular 'a beautiful place' but refers to plural 'rural areas' mentioned earlier. Subject-verb agreement and number must match: 'areas' -> 'places' and use plural pronoun 'they' or keep singular by changing sentence to refer to 'a rural area'. Suggestion: Keep number consistent across sentences.

× Yes, I really prefer Will in my country because we have a lot of natural attractions.

✓ Yes, I really prefer well-known views in my country because we have a lot of natural attractions.

Original 'prefer Will' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. Clarify meaning—if meant 'well' or 'will' it's incorrect. I replaced with 'well-known views' to fit context. Also ensure 'in my country' is correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Choose the correct noun phrase ('views', 'places') and avoid typos.

× For example, in my hometown we have a temple and a mountain to travelling, so it's very good.

✓ For example, in my hometown we have a temple and a mountain for traveling, so they are very nice.

Errors: 'to travelling' is incorrect; use 'for traveling' or 'to visit' depending on meaning. Also 'it's very good' is vague and mismatched number—use 'they are very nice' to refer to 'temple and mountain'. Suggestion: Use appropriate preposition ('for') with gerund or use infinitive 'to visit', and match plurality and adjective choice for clarity.