Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Говоря по-русски: ваша идея понятна, но ответ несвязный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Нужно сформулировать тему предложения, убрать бессмысленные фразы («in the bottles», «in the small one») и дать конкретный пример. Также сократите ответ до 2–4 предложений, используйте связки (for example, because, so) и исправьте грамматику (I especially like…, I think that…).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing small, beautiful details like flowers or reflections because they capture moments I might otherwise forget. For example, last week I took a close-up of sunlight on a dewdrop and it reminded me of an early morning walk.

Gợi ý: Говоря по-русски: ответ очень запутанный и длина фраз превышает норму. Начинайте с прямого утверждения (I prefer…), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины и пример. Используйте связующие слова (because, for example, also) и избегайте бессвязных фраз («to her united language»). Обратите внимание на порядок слов и согласование (birds sing, the sound of water).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of scenes and unique architecture. For example, I love early mornings in the city when birds are singing and fountains make pleasant sounds, creating a lively atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Говоря по-русски: мысль в целом ясна, но выражение неясное и содержит ошибки лексики и порядка слов. Сформулируйте краткий основной ответ (Both/I prefer…), объясните причину и добавьте цель или план. Избегайте фраз типа «Not every country came to Boston». Употребляйте правильные формы (I have seen, I would like to see).

Ví dụ: That's a difficult question. I love the varied landscapes of my own country, Russia, because we have so many different regions, but I would also like to see other countries to experience new cultures. For instance, I dream of visiting Japan and France to photograph their unique cityscapes and countryside.

× Of course I like I especially think that the beauty in the eyes, in the bottles.

✓ Of course I like it. I especially think that beauty is in the eyes and in small details.

The original has sentence structure problems and missing object: 'I like I' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'the beauty in the eyes, in the bottles' is awkward; 'beauty is in the eyes and in small details' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: split into two sentences, include the pronoun 'it' after 'I like', use parallel noun phrases and articles appropriately. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So when humans can see beautiful things in the small one, taking pictures is a good chance to live some moments in memory.

✓ So when people can see beauty in small things, taking pictures is a good way to keep memories.

The phrase 'in the small one' misuses preposition and noun; 'live some moments in memory' is awkward. Replace 'humans' with 'people', 'in the small one' with 'in small things', and 'a good chance to live some moments in memory' with 'a good way to keep memories'. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'keep memories' or 'preserve memories'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Definitely the urban areas that another level feelings that gives the places especially I think it sounds like it can take the early mornings how birds singing the sound of water and so many things and you know especially in the many national countries to her united language some places.

✓ Definitely urban areas; they give a different level of feeling. I especially like how early mornings capture birdsong, the sound of water, and many other things in some cities.

Original sentence is run-on and ungrammatical, with incorrect word order and unclear phrases ('another level feelings that gives the places', 'it sounds like it can take the early mornings how birds singing'). Break into clear sentences, fix word order, use correct noun forms ('birdsong') and verbs ('capture'). Suggestion: write shorter sentences, use subject-verb agreement and natural collocations. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It's really hard. It's really hard question for me because I live in a pretty huge country where in Russia where we have literally everything, so many places, so beautiful.

✓ It's really hard. It's a difficult question for me because I live in a very large country, Russia, where we literally have everything: so many beautiful places.

Problems: missing article 'a' in 'hard question', redundant 'where', awkward word order. Use 'a difficult question' and restructure to 'I live in a very large country, Russia, where we literally have everything'. Use a colon or commas to list 'so many beautiful places'. Suggestion: remove repetition and ensure correct articles. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Not every country came to Boston, something like that.

✓ Not every country has places like Boston, something like that.

Original misuses past tense 'came' where a stative description is needed. Likely intended meaning is that not every country has places like Boston. Use present tense and appropriate verb 'has'. Suggestion: match verb tense and choose verbs that convey possession or similarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× But my dream number one is of course, see that all world, all countries to meet with.

✓ But my number one dream is, of course, to see the whole world and visit all countries.

Errors: incorrect word order and verb forms. Use noun phrase 'my number one dream' and infinitive 'to see' plus 'visit' for 'meet with'. 'all world' should be 'the whole world'. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to see' and parallel verbs 'see ... and visit ...', include articles where needed. Grammar problem type ID:8