Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct basic grammar (e.g., 'pictures of nature and wildlife', 'take photos'). Aim for natural phrases and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing nature and wildlife because I find scenery and birds fascinating. When I go outside, I focus on lighting and composition to capture interesting sky and landscape shots.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference or balanced view, then give specific comparisons using linking words (e.g., 'on the other hand', 'because'). Fix grammar and vocabulary: use 'capture' or 'take' instead of 'click', and complete sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers something different. In urban areas I enjoy capturing architecture and busy street scenes, while in rural areas I like wide open spaces and natural landscapes, which allow for peaceful composition.

Gợi ý: Make a clear statement about preference (or say you like both), and explain reasons concisely. Avoid filler words ('uh') and unclear phrases ('want to plant somewhere'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with correct grammar.

Ví dụ: I like photographing views both in my own country and abroad. At home I enjoy showcasing local landscapes and culture, and when I travel I try to capture the unique scenery of other countries to broaden my portfolio.

× Yes I like yes I like to take pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views.

The sentence repeats 'yes I like' which is unnecessary and creates awkward structure. Remove the duplication and add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity. Use a single clear statement: 'Yes, I like to take pictures of different views.' This fixes sentence structure issues (ID 26).

× I love scenery and I love wild living things.

✓ I love scenery and I love wildlife.

'Wild living things' is an awkward phrase; 'wildlife' is the correct collective noun. 'Scenery' is uncountable and fine. This addresses word choice and plurality (ID 13 and ID 1).

× I love to go outside to see the pic to click some pictures of the natures to the birds sky.

✓ I love to go outside to take pictures of nature, birds, and the sky.

The original contains informal/incorrect words: 'pic', 'natures', and an unclear order. Use 'take pictures' instead of 'click', 'nature' not 'natures', and list items clearly. This fixes verb choice and sentence structure (ID 26, ID 13, ID 1).

× For me it's both of the views.

✓ For me, I like both kinds of views.

'Both of the views' is awkward; say 'both kinds of views' or 'both types of views'. Add subject 'I like' to complete the idea. This corrects article/phrase use and sentence structure (ID 22 and ID 26).

× I want to click pictures because in urban areas I see lots of. Things that I want to captures in rural areas, you are more open spaces.

✓ I want to take pictures because in urban areas I see many interesting things to capture, and in rural areas there are more open spaces.

Original has a period breaking the sentence into a fragment, 'lots of.' is incomplete, 'captures' should be base form 'capture' after 'to', and 'you are more open spaces' is ungrammatical; replace with 'there are more open spaces.' This fixes sentence structure, verb form, and incorrect pronoun/use of there be (ID 26, ID 9, ID 11, ID 3).

× I personally, uh, love to take pictures in my country and the other countries because I live in my country.

✓ I personally love to take pictures in my country and in other countries because I live here.

Remove filler 'uh' and avoid repeating 'my country'. Use 'here' to refer back to the country you live in. This improves pronoun use and removes redundancy (ID 12 and ID 26).

× So I need to represent our beauty and definitely if I go to abroad or I want to plant somewhere that I visited.

✓ So I want to showcase our country's beauty, and if I go abroad or visit other places,

Use 'go abroad' without 'to', and 'showcase' or 'represent' plus 'country's beauty' is clearer. 'I want to plant' is incorrect—likely meant 'go to a place' or 'visit'. Clarify to 'visit other places.' This fixes preposition error and word choice (ID 11 and ID 13).

× So definitely I will capture the beauty of the other country as well.

✓ So I will definitely capture the beauty of other countries as well.

Change 'the other country' to 'other countries' to match the earlier plural idea and move 'definitely' to a more natural position. This corrects pluralization and adverb placement (ID 1 and ID 20).