Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures When I travel to other provinces. I usually take photos of myself and the local sensory scenery, especially landscape and historic buildings, because I want to keep memories of each trip.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I'd like rural areas better because I work and live in urban so when I want to relax I would prefer rural areas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing diverse scenery. Scenery that's quite different from home, for example, like coastal visitors with dramatic sunsets and rugged mountain ranges where I can go hiking and.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰,表达了喜欢拍照并给出拍摄对象和原因。但存在语法错误(例如大写错误、短语不自然“local sensory scenery”)、句子冗长且缺少连贯词,细节可更具体。建议:使用正确大小写与更自然的词汇(例如“local scenery”或“local sights”),把信息分成2–3个简短句子,加入连接词并给出具体例子(如某次旅行拍下的建筑或风景)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures, especially when I travel to other provinces. I usually photograph myself and local sights, such as historic buildings and mountain landscapes, because I want to preserve memories of each trip. For example, on my last trip I took several photos of an ancient temple at sunset.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且内容相关,表达了偏好并给出原因。但语句可更自然,注意重复“rural areas”,并用连接词使结构更流畅。可加入具体细节说明农村景色如何让你放松(如安静、空气清新)。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I live and work in a busy city, so the countryside helps me relax. The quiet surroundings, fresh air and open fields make it easier for me to unwind after a stressful week.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好和部分理由,但句子结尾不完整,且有词汇使用不当(如“coastal visitors”应为“coastal views”或“coastlines”)。建议把想法用两到三句表达清楚,补全句子并给出具体例子,比如某国家的海岸或山脉。
Ví dụ: I usually prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing landscapes that are very different from home. For example, I love coastal views with dramatic sunsets in Portugal and rugged mountain ranges in Nepal, where I could go hiking and explore new trails.
× Yes, I like taking pictures When I travel to other provinces.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures when I travel to other provinces.
句中大写的 'When' 放在句中应为小写 'when';此外本句的结构为一般现在时描述习惯,使用动名词 'taking' 是正确的,仅需修正大小写。建议注意句中连词和标点的大小写规范。
× I usually take photos of myself and the local sensory scenery, especially landscape and historic buildings, because I want to keep memories of each trip.
✓ I usually take photos of myself and the local scenery, especially landscapes and historic buildings, because I want to keep memories of each trip.
原句中 'sensory scenery' 用法不自然且不符合常用搭配,'scenery' 不需要 'sensory' 修饰;另外 'landscape' 在此处应使用复数 'landscapes' 来表示不同的景观(数量上的泛指),属于形容词/名词使用不当和单复数问题。建议去掉不合适的形容词并根据语境使用复数形式。 (问题类型覆盖:13 和 1; 根据要求只列出符合问题列表的主类型,这里按13处理。)
× I'd like rural areas better because I work and live in urban so when I want to relax I would prefer rural areas.
✓ I'd prefer rural areas because I work and live in the city, so when I want to relax I prefer rural areas.
原句 'in urban' 用法不正确,'urban' 是形容词,名词位置应使用 'the city' 或 'urban areas'。另外句中重复表达偏好,建议统一为 'prefer' 保持时态一致并用正确名词短语。此为单复数/名词选择错误(ID 1)。建议学习形容词与名词的搭配:'urban area(s)' 或 'the city'。
× I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing diverse scenery. Scenery that's quite different from home, for example, like coastal visitors with dramatic sunsets and rugged mountain ranges where I can go hiking and.
✓ I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing diverse scenery that's quite different from home. For example, I like coastal vistas with dramatic sunsets and rugged mountain ranges where I can go hiking.
原段落句子结构混乱:'Scenery that's...' 是不完整的片段,且 'like coastal visitors' 用词错误('visitors' 指人,不是景色),句尾以 'and.' 结尾不完整。需要把两个句子合并并补全,使用 'vistas' 或 'views' 表示景观,去掉不恰当的名词。建议注意完整句子主语谓语的配对和避免句子残缺。