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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Oh, undoubtedly, yes. I really enjoy this kind of, uh, activities. So after that I feel really excited and especially I like to taking pictures of nature because it's so gorgeous.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Oh, I mostly prefer rural areas because, uh, many people don't have seen this kind of areas and pictures of that kind of places makes me and our people more, uh, enthusiastic to see this kind of places. And it will be.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Of course I prefer views of my country firstly because I I never have been in other countries and I mostly like my country areas because it's historical and magical and other people will also like it and will be memorizable.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Говорите более естественно и последовательно: избегайте междометий («uh»), исправляйте грамматические ошибки и используйте связки. Начните с чёткой темы, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных уточнения. Например, используйте правильную форму после 'like' (doing) и уберите лишние слова.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially nature scenes, because they are very beautiful. I often feel excited after a shoot, and I like to capture details like light and color to remember the place.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: Сосредоточьтесь на прямом ответе и давайте конкретные причины. Избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок (use 'have not seen', 'these areas', 'make us enthusiastic'). Используйте связки: 'because', 'for example', 'so'. Дайте максимум две поддерживающие детали.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes and unique scenery that many people may not have seen. For example, I enjoy photographing old villages and fields, which often show interesting textures and colors.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: Отвечайте ясно и кратко: исправьте порядок слов и времена ('I have never been to other countries'). Дайте конкретные причины и примеры, избегайте двусмысленности ('memorizable' лучше заменить на 'memorable'). Используйте связки: 'because', 'also', 'for example'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I have never been abroad and I love our historical and picturesque sites. For example, ancient towns and natural parks here feel magical and are very memorable for visitors.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of articles

× I really enjoy this kind of, uh, activities.

I really enjoy these kinds of activities.

The phrase 'this kind of activities' mixes singular 'this kind of' with plural 'activities'. Use 'these kinds of activities' or 'this kind of activity'. Use plural demonstrative 'these' with 'kinds' when referring to multiple activities.

Incorrect use of verb form (verb + -ing)

× I like to taking pictures of nature because it's so gorgeous.

I like taking pictures of nature because it's so gorgeous.

After 'like', use either the infinitive 'to take' or the gerund 'taking', not 'to taking'. Use 'I like taking' for general preference.

Singular and plural issue

× many people don't have seen this kind of areas

many people haven't seen these kinds of areas

'Have seen' with negative should be 'haven't seen'. Also 'this kind of areas' is incorrect for plural; use 'these kinds of areas'. Ensure subject-verb agreement with plural forms.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× pictures of that kind of places makes me and our people more, uh, enthusiastic to see this kind of places.

pictures of those kinds of places make me and our people more enthusiastic to see those places.

Subject 'pictures' is plural so verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also use 'those kinds of places' or 'those places' for plural; avoid repeating 'kind of places'—use 'places' or 'kinds of places' consistently.

Sentence structure errors

× And it will be.

And it will be memorable.

'And it will be.' is incomplete and vague. Add an adjective like 'memorable' to complete the idea: 'And it will be memorable.'

Past tense issue

× I I never have been in other countries

I have never been to other countries

Use present perfect 'have never been' and the preposition 'to' with 'been' for places: 'been to other countries'. Also remove repeated 'I'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I mostly like my country areas because it's historical and magical and other people will also like it and will be memorizable.

I mainly like the areas of my country because they are historical and magical, and other people will also like them and find them memorable.

Use 'mainly' instead of 'mostly' for preference clarity; 'my country areas' -> 'the areas of my country'; refer to plural 'areas' with 'they are' not 'it's'. 'Memorizable' is awkward; use 'memorable' and say 'find them memorable'. Ensure pronouns agree in number.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ExcitedThrilled; Aroused
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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