Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct the grammatical error and make the sentence more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason. Avoid redundancy like “click the picture” and “lifetime memory” together; choose clearer phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different scenes because they help me preserve special memories. For example, when I photograph a sunset, I can remember the colours and mood of that moment even years later.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (plural/singular) and remove filler words. Provide a topic sentence stating preference, then a specific reason with an example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer varied natural scenes like fields, hills and forests. For instance, last summer I took photos of a misty valley which highlighted the textures and colours better than city scenes do.

Gợi ý: Make sentences grammatically correct and more concise. State your current situation clearly, then add a hypothetical with proper conditional phrasing. Replace informal words like “clicked” with “take photos” and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: So far I mainly take photos in my own country because I haven't travelled much. However, if I had the opportunity to travel abroad, I would definitely photograph famous landmarks and local landscapes to capture new experiences.

× Yes, I love to taking pictures of different views because I think it's a lifetime memory when we click the picture.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I think they become lifelong memories when we take pictures.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the base form or the gerund without 'to' + gerund. 'Love to taking' mixes 'to' infinitive with a gerund; correct forms are 'love to take' or 'love taking'. Also 'a lifetime memory' is slightly awkward for plural photos, so use 'lifelong memories', and 'click the picture' is informal; use 'take pictures' and match pluralization.

× Honestly, I love to click pictures of rural area because there are different kind of views.

✓ Honestly, I love to take pictures of rural areas because there are different kinds of views.

Use 'rural areas' plural to match general meaning and 'different kinds of views' requires plural 'kinds' and plural agreement. Also 'love to click' should be 'love to take' or 'love taking' (related to verb+ -ing), but the main adjective/adverb issue here is singular/plural nouns and noun phrase agreement.

× Uh, mostly I like the nature view.

✓ Uh, mostly I like natural scenery.

'The nature view' is unidiomatic and mixes article with an uncountable concept. 'Nature' as a noun is typically used without 'the' when speaking generally, and 'view' can be plural or replaced with 'scenery' (uncountable). 'Natural scenery' is a natural collocation.

× As I did not travel a lot, I just clicked pictures in my own country.

✓ As I have not traveled much, I have only taken pictures in my own country.

The original uses simple past 'did not travel' and 'just clicked' but the present perfect 'have not traveled' and 'have taken' better express life experience up to now. Also 'just' is better as 'only' in this context; 'traveled much' is the correct adverb placement.

× But if I had a chance to go to another country and click pictures and make memories, I will definitely go and visit there.

✓ But if I had the chance to go to another country and take pictures and make memories, I would definitely go and visit there.

This conditional mixes second conditional form with 'will'. For a hypothetical present/unreal situation, use 'If I had... I would...'. Also 'a chance' -> 'the chance' is more natural in this structure, and 'click pictures' -> 'take pictures'.