Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. Focus on clarity: use correct verb forms (e.g., "it refreshes my mind"), and simple linking words like "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it refreshes my mind and helps me relax. For example, when I walk in a park I often take photos of trees and lakes to remember the peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer phrasing and linking words. State your preference in one sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Correct prepositions and collocations (e.g., "prefer rural areas," "close to nature"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer rural areas because I love being close to nature. For example, villages have different types of trees and quiet paths where I can take peaceful photos and relax.

Gợi ý: Give a concise opinion and support it with a specific reason and a clear example. Use correct sentence structure and verb forms (e.g., "many visitors take pictures"). Name places accurately and explain why they are special. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes that I know well. For example, the Naran and Kaghan areas are famous for their mountain scenery, and many visitors take pictures there because the views are spectacular.

× I think it's refreshes my mind and I love it very much is.

✓ I think it refreshes my mind and I love it very much.

The student used 'it's refreshes' which mixes contraction 'it's' (it is) with the verb 'refreshes'. Use the simple present 'it refreshes' to describe a habitual effect. Remove the extra 'is'. Suggestion: say 'I think it refreshes my mind.'

× Keep me my mind comfortable and it's very fantabulous thing for me and I every time try this.

✓ It keeps my mind comfortable, and it is a wonderful activity that I try to do every time.

The original has incorrect word order and unnatural vocabulary ('fantabulous', 'Keep me my mind comfortable'). Correct by using subject-verb 'It keeps my mind comfortable' and proper noun phrases 'a wonderful activity'. Move 'every time' to 'every time I try to do it' or 'that I try to do every time' for natural structure.

× I usually prefer to the rural areas because as well as I love the nature and in the village it's very easy method to close the nature.

✓ I usually prefer rural areas because I love nature, and in the village it is easy to get close to nature.

Incorrect use of prepositions: 'prefer to the rural areas' should be 'prefer rural areas' or 'prefer the rural areas'. 'Love the nature' should be 'love nature'. 'Easy method to close the nature' is wrong; use the phrase 'easy to get close to nature'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary 'to' after 'prefer' and use 'get close to' to express proximity.

× For example see the different type of trees like mine.

✓ For example, you can see different types of trees there, like pines.

The sentence lacks proper structure and plurality: 'different type' should be 'different types'. 'See' needs a subject or modal 'you can see'. 'Like mine' is unclear; likely meant a type of tree such as 'pines'. Suggest adding a clear subject and plural noun.

× I usually prefer views in my own state because I love it very much and in my country different types of views.

✓ I usually prefer views in my own state because I love it very much, and my country has many different types of scenery.

The clause 'in my country different types of views' is missing a verb. Use present simple 'my country has' to state a general fact. Also 'views' can be more naturally 'scenery'. Ensure subject and verb agreement.

× Very grateful for the pictures.

✓ I am very grateful for the pictures.

Sentence lacks a subject and verb. Add the subject 'I' and the verb 'am' to form a complete sentence in present simple. 'Very grateful' alone is a fragment; use 'I am very grateful'.

× For example like Naran Gagan Marie area, many visitors are take pictures on this area.

✓ For example, in the Naran Gagan Marie area, many visitors take pictures there.

Incorrect verb form 'are take' mixes auxiliary 'are' with base verb; use simple present 'take' for habitual actions. Preposition 'on this area' is wrong; use 'in this area' or 'there'. Also include commas for clarity.