Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, yeah), correct grammar (singular/plural, tense), and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it to a maximum of 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I was a child I often used my phone to photograph the park, especially in spring when the cherry blossoms were in full bloom. I like capturing seasonal colors because they make the photos more vivid.

Gợi ý: Structure your reply with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (because, so). Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (use 'there are', 'more than the city', 'noisy and crowded'). Keep sentences short and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because there is much more nature and open space. Rural places are quieter and less crowded than big cities, so I find them more relaxing and photogenic.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer, correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'abroad', 'too many people'), and give one clear reason with an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and avoid repeating words (e.g., 'natural nature'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views abroad because I can visit places with more unspoiled nature. For instance, when I travel to rural areas overseas I often find wide forests and mountains, which are less common near my city in Japan.

× Personally, I like taking picture, so I think yeah, I like taking pictures of different views.

✓ Personally, I like taking pictures, so I think, yeah, I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the speaker refers to taking photos in general (a countable plural sense). Use consistent plural form. Also add a comma after 'think' for natural pause. Suggestion: use 'pictures' whenever talking about photos in general or multiple images.

× Umm, when I was a kid I umm, used to use my phone to take a picture in a park and in spring it is really.

✓ Umm, when I was a kid I used to use my phone to take pictures in a park, and in spring it was really nice.

The phrase 'used to' correctly indicates past habitual action, but 'take a picture' should be 'take pictures' for general repeated actions. The clause 'in spring it is really' uses present tense and is incomplete; it should be past tense 'it was really nice' to match 'when I was a kid'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) and complete the adjective (nice/beautiful).

× I prefer rural areas because there, umm, so many nature and then personally I prefer umm, nature than city.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there is so much nature, and personally I prefer nature to the city.

Use 'there is' with 'so much nature' (uncountable) rather than 'there ... so many nature'. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. Also 'the city' is more natural with the noun 'city' in contrast. Suggestion: use 'so much' for uncountable nouns and 'prefer X to Y'.

× Big city like supermarket and there's noisy and then crowded prices.

✓ Big cities, like the supermarkets, are noisy and crowded.

Pronoun and noun agreement: 'Big city' should be plural 'Big cities' when speaking generally. 'Like supermarket' needs article 'the supermarkets' or 'supermarkets'. 'There's noisy' is incorrect; use 'are noisy' to agree with plural subject. 'Crowded prices' is wrong phrase; 'crowded' describes places, so 'crowded' alone suffices. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and use correct articles.

× So yeah, I like nature, that's why.

✓ So yeah, I like nature; that's why.

The original is understandable but slightly awkward. Use a semicolon or rephrase: 'That's why I like nature' is clearer. Suggestion: place 'that's why' before the reason or connect sentences more smoothly.

× I prefer the abuse in another country.

✓ I prefer the views in another country.

'Abuse' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation of 'views' or 'scenery'. Replace with 'views' to fit context. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'views' or 'scenery' when talking about landscapes.

× I live in Japan but Japan is quite big city and they're always clouded and too much people, so I pre prefer natural nature.

✓ I live in Japan, but Japan has many big cities and it's often cloudy and too crowded, so I prefer natural scenery.

'Japan is quite big city' is wrong: Japan 'has many big cities' or 'is a country with big cities'. 'They're always clouded' mixes pronouns; use 'it's often cloudy' for weather. 'Too much people' should be 'too crowded' or 'too many people' with plural noun. 'Pre prefer' is a typo for 'prefer'. 'Natural nature' is redundant; use 'natural scenery' or 'nature'. Suggestion: correct subject-verb references and use appropriate nouns/adjectives.

× So yeah, we don't have a lot of nature in my country that's why.

✓ So yeah, we don't have a lot of nature in my country; that's why.

The sentence needs punctuation and slight reordering: 'that's why' should follow the reason or be combined: 'That's why we don't have a lot of nature in my country' is awkward; better: 'We don't have a lot of nature in my country, so that's why I prefer other countries.' Also ensure 'nature' is treated as uncountable 'a lot of nature' is acceptable. Suggestion: clarify cause and effect and use proper punctuation.