Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và truyền đạt được ý chính nhưng còn quá dài, lặp từ và thiếu cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: 'photo', 'picture') và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ: 'help' -> 'helps'; 'my picture' -> 'my pictures').

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I love capturing beautiful scenery when I travel because photos help me remember special moments. For example, I often share my pictures on social media to stay connected with friends, and taking photos is a relaxing hobby for me.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời truyền đạt ý nhưng nhiều tiếng ằn ặn (uh, umm), lặp ý (rural areas) và kết cấu câu rời rạc. Hãy tắt tiếng lấp đầy, dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một hoặc hai câu hỗ trợ với từ nối (because, so, for example). Cố gắng cụ thể hơn về cảm giác hoặc hoạt động bạn làm để 'recharge'.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery like mountains, rivers and wide fields. For example, the fresh air and quiet countryside help me relax and recharge after a busy week, so I often go hiking or sit by a river to unwind.

Gợi ý: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng phát âm ngắt quãng, nhiều tiếng lấp đầy và một vài lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I like the both' -> 'I like both', 'I have explore' -> 'I have explored'). Sử dụng cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu quan điểm rồi nêu lý do với liên từ (because, and). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa 'broaden my horizon'.

Ví dụ: I like both. My country has many beautiful places that I know well, so I enjoy revisiting them. At the same time, I like traveling abroad because seeing landscapes in other countries exposes me to different cultures and broadens my horizons—for instance, visiting Japan taught me about different garden styles and traditions.

× Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel, just taking photos help me remember special moments and places and I really enjoy sharing my picture on social media with friends and photography is a relaxing hobby for me. Yes, so I.

✓ Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel. Just taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends. Photography is a relaxing hobby for me.

This sentence is a run-on with multiple independent clauses joined incorrectly and contains subject-verb agreement errors ('photos help' should be 'photos helps' only if 'taking photos' considered singular; better to rephrase). Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match context. Suggestions: split into shorter sentences, ensure subject-verb agreement (plural subject with plural verb), and use plural nouns when referring to multiple items. Grammar problem types: 26 (Sentence structure errors), 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× Personally, I like uh, the view in rural areas because I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields, and I like uh, fresh air in rural areas and in rural and this here I can, uh, recharge my battery and enjoy, umm, the peaceful.

✓ Personally, I like the views in rural areas because I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers, and fields, and I enjoy the fresh air in the countryside. Here I can recharge my batteries and enjoy the peace.

Problems include redundant prepositional phrases ('in rural areas and in rural'), wrong noun form ('the peaceful' should be 'the peace'), and collocation errors ('recharge my battery' is better as 'recharge my batteries'). Also use 'views' plural. Suggestions: remove repetition, use correct collocations, and choose appropriate nouns for abstract ideas. Grammar problem types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× Uh, to be honest, I like the both because in my country has many, uh, beautiful scenery. Uh, I have explore that, uh, besides, I like, uh, scenery in other country because I, umm, I can explore different cultural and, uh, broaden my horizon.

✓ To be honest, I like both because my country has many beautiful scenic places that I have explored. Besides, I like scenery in other countries because I can experience different cultures and broaden my horizons.

Multiple issues: incorrect article and determiner usage ('the both' should be 'both'), missing subject in 'in my country has many' (needs subject 'my country has'), incorrect verb form 'I have explore' should be 'I have explored', singular/plural mismatch 'other country' should be 'other countries', and collocation 'different cultural' should be 'different cultures' or 'cultural experiences'. Suggestions: use correct determiners, include proper subjects and auxiliary verbs, use past participle for present perfect, and pluralize nouns when generalizing. Grammar problem types: 22 (Article errors), 23 (Sentence without a verb), 9 (Verb in the past participle form), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)