Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like take the picture in different view. When I when I travel I usually take the P picture such as a size or my friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I do like urban areas because I like the beautiful buildings and the mall.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Both of two because my country is beautiful and many city I never been and other countries. I also think it's funny and I want to feeling.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 要提高流利度和准确性:1) 注意时态和动词形式(如 "take" 应为 "taking" 或 "take" 的正确搭配)。2) 减少重复和口头填充词(例如去掉多余的 "when I when I")。3) 句子结构要更清晰,先给出主句(肯定/否定),然后用一到两句具体例子支撑,并使用连词如 "for example" 或 "such as"。4) 提高词汇准确性("a size" 可能想说 "a scene" 或 "sunrise/sunset"),选择与拍照相关的词汇如 "landscapes, portraits, landmarks"。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I travel, I usually photograph landscapes and landmarks; for example, I often shoot sunsets and interesting city scenes to remember the trip.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 提高表达的丰富性和连贯性:1) 先给出直接回答(Urban/Rural/Both),然后用一到两句具体原因支持。2) 使用连接词(because, also, moreover)使句子更自然。3) 提供更具体的细节而不是泛泛而谈(比如举例建筑类型、城市景点或市场)。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy the architecture and vibrant street life. For example, I like photographing modern skyscrapers and busy markets, which offer interesting colors and compositions.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 改善语法和表达清晰度:1) 用更自然的短语回答("both" 或者具体偏好)。2) 注意冠词和数的使用("many cities I have never been to")。3) 用更合适的词表达情感("funny" 不恰当,可用 "exciting" 或 "interesting"),并说明原因(文化差异、风景多样)。4) 用一两个连贯句子给出具体例子或体验。
Ví dụ: I like views both in my country and abroad. My country has many beautiful places I haven't visited yet, and traveling abroad is exciting because I can experience different cultures and landscapes, which gives me fresh inspiration for photos.
× Yes, I like take the picture in different view.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
句子中 like 后应接动词的 -ing 形式(动名词)表示喜好;同时 picture 和 view 应使用复数形式以与习惯性行动匹配,并且介词短语应为 "of different views" 更自然。建议:记住 like / enjoy / dislike 等动词后面接动名词(doing)。
× When I when I travel I usually take the P picture such as a size or my friend.
✓ When I travel, I usually take photos of places or my friends.
原句有重复的 'when I',并且 'take the P picture' 是不正确的表达,可能是想说 'take pictures'。'such as a size' 也没有意义,应改为具体名词如 'places'。需要删去重复、修正名词和词序。建议:说惯常行为用 When I travel, I usually ...,并用 plural 'photos' 或 'pictures'。
× I do like urban areas because I like the beautiful buildings and the mall.
✓ I do like urban areas because I like the beautiful buildings and the malls.
句中 'the mall' 听起来指特定的商场,但前文泛指城市环境下的商场,应用复数 'malls' 或去掉定冠词。如果想泛指可改为 'malls' 或 'shopping malls'。建议:当泛指一类事物时使用复数(malls)或不使用定冠词。
× Both of two because my country is beautiful and many city I never been and other countries.
✓ Both — my own country and other countries — because my country is beautiful and there are many cities I have never been to.
原句结构混乱:'Both of two' 用法错误,应说 'Both' 或 'Both of them';'many city I never been' 缺主语/助动词和介词,正确为 'many cities I have never been to'。需要加上完成时(I have never been to)来表达到目前为止未去过。建议:用 Both 或 Both of them 引出两个选项,表达未曾去过某地时用 'have never been to'。
× I also think it's funny and I want to feeling.
✓ I also think it's fun and I want to feel it.
'funny' 意为有趣/滑稽,语境应为 'fun'(令人愉快)。'I want to feeling' 语法错误,want 后接动词原形 'feel',若要用名词则 'a feeling',但此处应为 'feel it' 表达想要体验那种感觉。建议:remember want + to + verb (want to feel),区分 fun (有趣) 与 funny (好笑)。