Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời vẫn chưa tự nhiên và có vài lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm ý thiếu rõ ràng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (số nhiều, dạng động từ), và rút gọn ý để không lặp ý (ví dụ: 'I feel relaxed and recharged' thay vì hai câu dài). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể ngắn để làm rõ bạn thích chụp cảnh gì (ví dụ: hoàng hôn, đường phố).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. It helps me relax and feel recharged after a long day. For example, I especially like photographing sunsets because of their warm colours and peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp (so sánh, danh từ số nhiều, cấu trúc câu) và thiếu cụ thể; câu cuối bị bỏ dở và không rõ ý. Hãy nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng ('I prefer urban views'), dùng so sánh đúng ('rather than'), cung cấp một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views rather than rural ones because cityscapes with buildings and lights help me unwind after work. For instance, I enjoy walking along lively streets at dusk and photographing neon signs and skyline silhouettes.

Gợi ý: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và một số từ dùng không chính xác; câu ví dụ thiếu rõ ràng ('just in the foods'). Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề. Sửa cụm từ như 'I feel a stronger sense of belonging at home' và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (tên lễ hội, món ăn). Tránh lặp từ 'me'/'my'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a stronger sense of belonging there. My family and friends live nearby and I understand the culture; for example, watching the Lunar New Year parades and tasting traditional dishes makes local scenes more meaningful to me.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different view and I believe that every people also like it because it's make me feel relaxed and recharge my energy after a long day.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views and I believe that everyone also likes it because it makes me feel relaxed and recharges my energy after a long day.

Some nouns need plural forms: 'picture' -> 'pictures', 'view' -> 'views'. 'every people' is incorrect; use 'everyone'. Subject-verb agreement with singular subjects: 'everyone also likes' and 'it makes' and 'recharges' must be in third person singular. Suggestion: identify the subject (singular/plural) and change noun forms and verb endings accordingly.

× I prefer view in urban area than rural area because landscape in urban area make me feel relax and clear my mind after a long day at work and school.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas to rural areas because the landscapes in urban areas make me feel relaxed and clear my mind after a long day at work or school.

Use plural nouns for general statements: 'view' -> 'views', 'urban area' -> 'urban areas', 'rural area' -> 'rural areas', 'landscape' -> 'landscapes'. Also 'prefer ... to ...' is the correct pattern. Ensure verbs agree with plural subject: 'landscapes ... make'. Use 'relaxed' (adjective) not 'relax'.

× And I believe that urban area make everyone.

✓ And I believe that urban areas appeal to everyone.

Subject-verb agreement: 'urban area' (singular) with verb needs third person singular 'makes' or better use plural 'urban areas make'. Original sentence is incomplete/unnatural. Suggest clearer verb 'appeal to' and pluralize subject to match meaning.

× In my country I feel a strong sense of belonging because my family and friends live there and I know the culture well.

✓ In my country, I feel a strong sense of belonging because my family and friends live there and I know the culture well.

This sentence is grammatically correct but needs a comma after the introductory phrase for natural flow. Suggestion: add punctuation for clarity.

× For example, I enjoy local festival and just in the foods in here.

✓ For example, I enjoy local festivals and the food here.

Use plural 'festivals' for general enjoyment. 'just in the foods in here' is incorrect phrase — simplify to 'the food here'. Use correct noun phrase order: quantifier/adjective before noun. Suggestion: learn common collocations: 'enjoy local festivals' and 'the food here'.

× So the view at home always feels me more meaningful to me.

✓ So the view at home always feels more meaningful to me.

Incorrect use of 'feels me' — 'feel' is intransitive here and takes a complement, not an object. Remove 'me' after 'feels' and keep 'to me' to indicate the experiencer. Also 'more meaningful to me' is sufficient. Suggestion: with 'feel' meaning 'seem to a person', use structure 'feel + adjective + to someone'.