Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I don't like taking pictures of different views because I want to see it by my mind.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
It's hard to see which is better if I can choose. I prefer between Uber area and the rural areas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
The views both in our country and in other country are all beautiful. It can say which is better. I prefer the best view in my mind.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法错误,信息也很有限。应该先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意时态和表达,例如用“I prefer to keep the memory in my mind”而不是“see it by my mind”。同时避免绝对否定,可适当承认例外。
Ví dụ: I usually prefer not to take photos of views. I like to remember scenes in my mind because it helps me focus on the moment and enjoy the atmosphere. However, if a view is unique or I want to share it, I might take a photo.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答混乱,有语法和词汇错误(例如“Uber area”应为“urban area”),并且没有给出明确立场或具体比较细节。应先给出偏好,然后用比较性细节支持(例如安静、自然、建筑等)。使用连词如“because”或“although”来衔接句子。
Ví dụ: I generally prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is quieter and greener, which helps me relax. Although cities have interesting architecture and vibrant streets, I value open spaces and natural landscapes more.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且句子不通顺,有多处语法错误(例如“can say which is better”应表达为“it's hard to say which is better”)。应先给出立场或承认难以比较,然后提供具体理由或例子(如文化特色、风景类型、回忆)。使用连接词如“because”来说明原因。
Ví dụ: I find it hard to say whether views at home or abroad are better because both offer different charms. For example, landscapes in my country remind me of childhood memories, while views abroad often showcase unique architecture and cultures that fascinate me.
× I don't like taking pictures of different views because I want to see it by my mind.
✓ I don't like taking pictures of different views because I want to see them in my mind.
原句中 "it" 用来代指 "different views"(复数),但代词应与先行词在数上保持一致,应该使用复数代词 "them"。另外,习惯表达是 "see something in my mind",因此将 "by my mind" 改为更自然的 "in my mind"。建议多注意代词的人称和单复数一致性,并记忆固定短语搭配。
× It's hard to see which is better if I can choose. I prefer between Uber area and the rural areas.
✓ It's hard to say which is better if I could choose. I prefer areas between urban and rural, or I prefer suburban areas.
第一句中应使用习惯搭配 "hard to say"(而非 "hard to see")来表达难以判断;同时原句时态/语气不自然,改为虚拟语气 "if I could choose" 更符合情境。第二句中 "I prefer between Uber area and the rural areas" 有多个问题:'Uber' 应为地理形容词 "urban"(城市的),且 "prefer between..." 不是正确搭配,应该说 "prefer A to B" 或更自然地说明 "prefer urban or rural"。若意指介于城乡之间的地区,应使用 "suburban areas" 或 "areas between urban and rural"。建议注意单词拼写,掌握 prefer 的常见表达法(prefer A to B / prefer doing X)。
× The views both in our country and in other country are all beautiful. It can say which is better. I prefer the best view in my mind.
✓ The views both in our country and in other countries are beautiful. You can't say which is better. I prefer the best view in my mind.
第一句中 "other country" 应为复数形式 "other countries",因为前面说的是两类地方,且用复数更自然;同时不需要 "all",直接说 "are beautiful" 即可。第二句中原句语法和语义不通:"It can say which is better" 不合逻辑,改为常见表达 "You can't say which is better"(无法确定哪个更好)。第三句 "I prefer the best view in my mind" 语法可接受,但更自然的说法可保留原意。建议注意代词与名词的数的一致性,避免使用不明确的主语(如 it)来表达一般性判断。