Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence stating you enjoy taking photos, then give one or two specific reasons (use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'). Avoid vague phrases and unclear words. Limit your answer to a few coherent sentences and check word choice (e.g. 'views' or 'places' instead of 'you').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each place has its own atmosphere and story. For example, I like photographing coastal landscapes because the changing light creates dramatic scenes, and I feel relaxed when I take photos outdoors.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details with linking words. Replace filler words (uh) and complete your final idea. Mention concrete features (e.g. scenery, sounds, pace of life) to make your answer vivid and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside is peaceful and less crowded. For example, I enjoy listening to birds and seeing wide fields and mountains, which helps me relax and recharge after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and link ideas clearly. Use full sentences and provide specific examples with correct grammar and word order. Explain why familiar places matter (memories, language, convenience) and avoid fragmented phrases like 'Depends on my mood'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with many beautiful places and they hold personal memories. For example, when I feel down I go to Yuma Mountain near my home because hiking there reminds me of childhood trips and always lifts my spirits.

× Yes I like taking picture different of you because every different of you makes me feel very comfortable and exciting because all they have very different meaning.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because each one makes me feel very comfortable and excited since they all have different meanings.

Errors: 'taking picture different of you' misorders words and uses 'you' instead of 'views' (word choice/pronoun); 'picture' should be plural 'pictures'; 'every different of you' is incorrect; 'exciting' should be 'excited' (adjective vs adverb/adjectival form). Suggestion: use correct noun order 'taking pictures of different views', use 'each one' or 'each view', and use 'excited' to describe feeling. Also split into clearer clauses with commas.

× Some CS me means me min me that.

✓ Some colors or scenes mean something to me.

Original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and fragments. 'Some CS me means me min me that' appears to attempt to say that some scenes or colors have personal meaning. Use explicit subject 'Some colors or scenes' and verb 'mean' with object 'something to me' to convey meaning clearly.

× I prefer views of rural areas because rural areas are very calm and silent.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because rural areas are very calm and quiet.

'Silent' describes absence of sound but is typically used for things like rooms; 'quiet' is the natural adjective for peaceful places. No tense change required. Use consistent adjective choice 'quiet' to sound natural.

× This is why I love rural areas because uh originally I am very calm person so then when I get there I feel very.

✓ This is why I love rural areas: I am a naturally calm person, so when I go there I feel very relaxed.

Original sentence is fragmented and incomplete ('I feel very.'), has filler 'uh originally' and missing article 'a'. Improve structure by combining clauses, adding 'a' before 'naturally calm person', and finishing idea with 'relaxed'. Use present simple 'I am' for general characteristic and present simple 'I go' for habitual action.

× I prefer to view my own country because I know lots of places to go.

✓ I prefer to visit places in my own country because I know many places to go.

'Prefer to view' is awkward; use 'prefer to visit' or 'prefer visiting'. Also 'lots of' is conversational; 'many' is more appropriate. Maintain present simple 'prefer' for general preference.

× Depends on my mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

Fragment missing subject 'It'. Add 'It' to form a complete sentence conveying that choice varies with mood.

× For example when I depressed I prefer to go to Yuma mountain where located in the nearby my house because there are larger memories.

✓ For example, when I am depressed I prefer to go to Yuma Mountain, which is located near my house, because I have many memories there.

Errors: missing 'am' after 'I' (present state), missing relative clause structure 'which is located near my house', incorrect 'in the nearby my house', and 'larger memories' is incorrect collocation; use 'many memories' or 'strong memories'. Use present simple 'I prefer' to indicate habitual preference and present state 'I am depressed' for condition.