Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy taking photos from different viewpoints because it help me capture more and show will competitions. For example, why photo city space from above I can include both the skyline and the big streets with.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in real areas because the open line space, gritty and fish air, fresh air are much more relaxing than crowded city space. For example. I enjoy watching videos here which which help me unwed. However I also.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
MMM.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,句子不连贯,信息含糊。建议先给出明确的主题句,然后用1-2个支持细节并用连词衔接;注意动词时态和单复数(例如:it helps, competitions → compositions?),并把例子说清楚(从高处可以同时拍到天际线和街道)。尽量控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like photographing different views because it helps me capture unique perspectives. For example, when I shoot a city from above, I can include both the skyline and the busy streets. This contrast often makes my photos more interesting, so I try to experiment with different angles and heights.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 句子存在大量词汇和拼写错误(real→rural, line space? gritty and fish air?;unwed?),结构不完整且意思不明确。建议先直接表明偏好(I prefer rural views),随后用清晰具体的理由并用连接词(because, for example),最后给出一两个简短具体的例子。注意拼写和用词准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the wide open spaces and fresh air are more relaxing than crowded city scenes. For example, I enjoy sitting by a lake at sunset and watching birds, which helps me unwind after a busy week. However, I also appreciate some city views for their energy and architecture.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏信息,未正面回应问题。建议给出明确立场(prefer my country, other countries, or both),并提供一到两个具体理由或例子来支持观点。使用完整句子并控制长度。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultural features that I haven't seen before. For instance, seeing terraced rice fields in Asia or rugged coastlines in Europe inspires me to try new photography styles.
× Yes, I enjoy taking photos from different viewpoints because it help me capture more and show will competitions.
✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photos from different viewpoints because it helps me capture more and show wider compositions.
句中主语是第三人称单数的非人称主语(it 指代动作或情况),谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 helps;另外原句中的 show will competitions 语义混乱,推测想表达“展示更广的构图”,因此改为 show wider compositions。建议:注意动词和主语的主谓一致,并使用合适的名词短语来表达想法。
× For example, why photo city space from above I can include both the skyline and the big streets with.
✓ For example, by photographing a city from above, I can include both the skyline and the wide streets.
原句语序混乱且短语使用不当(why photo city space from above 不符合英语表达),应使用介词短语 by photographing a city from above 引出方式;另外 the big streets 可改为 the wide streets 更自然。建议:用合适的介词短语(by + 动名词)来说明方式,保持主句语序正确。
× I prefer views in real areas because the open line space, gritty and fish air, fresh air are much more relaxing than crowded city space.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscape, greenery and fresh air are much more relaxing than crowded city spaces.
原句中 real areas 应为 rural areas(乡村);open line space、gritty and fish air 词不达意且形容词使用错误,改为 open landscape(开阔景观)、greenery(绿植)和 fresh air(新鲜空气)。此外 city space 应为 city spaces 或 simply the city。建议:选择恰当词汇表达乡村特征,并注意可数名词复数形式和搭配。
× For example. I enjoy watching videos here which which help me unwed. However I also.
✓ For example, I enjoy watching videos here which help me unwind. However, I also like visiting places in person.
原句存在多处问题:重复单词 which which,应去掉重复;help me unwed 是拼写错误,应为 help me unwind(放松);句尾 However I also. 缺失内容和动词,需补全为完整句子。建议:避免重复词,检查拼写并确保句子完整,使用合适的动词短语(unwind)。
× MMM.
✓ (无法理解:请补充完整回答,例如: "I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the places.")
原句仅为拟声词 MMM,未构成完整句子且没有回答问题。建议:给出完整句子,包含主语和谓语,并说明偏好和理由。