Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần rút gọn câu trả lời, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác; tránh lặp ý. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó đưa 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ thích hợp. Ví dụ: sửa lỗi viết hoa không cần thiết và danh từ số nhiều/ít, dùng từ collocation phù hợp (take photos of sunsets, mountain views), và thay “stay with friends” bằng “share with friends” hoặc “keep as memories”.

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel because landscape and cityscape photography helps me relax after work. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and mountain views to remember a trip and to share with friends.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, cấu trúc câu và thay những cụm từ không chính xác bằng từ phù hợp; trả lời nên rõ ràng về sự ưu tiên (nếu không muốn chọn, giải thích lý do). Tránh câu lủng củng và từ không đúng (ví dụ: "bustling", "have n't take" incorrect tense, "man square" meaningless). Nên dùng linking words để liên kết ý (However, On the other hand).

Ví dụ: I like both, but for different reasons. Urban areas are vibrant and busy, with impressive skylines, so I enjoy photographing cityscapes when I explore new neighborhoods. On the other hand, rural areas are peaceful and scenic, which makes them perfect for wide landscape shots.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, loại bỏ từ thừa và dùng cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn; nêu lý do rõ ràng và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ (there there) và cấu trúc không hoàn chỉnh ("I especially let the countryside scenery..."). Dùng từ như "prefer views in my own country because..." và mô tả cụ thể điều khiến cảnh quan đặc sắc.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because there are many interesting and accessible places where I can relax before traveling abroad. For example, the countryside scenery at home often feels unique and peaceful, with rolling hills and traditional villages that I find beautiful.

× Yes, I'm a big fan of taking pictures of different views when I travel because photographing landscape and cityscapes helps me relax and feel refreshed after work.

✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of taking pictures of different views when I travel because photographing landscapes and cityscapes helps me relax and feel refreshed after work.

The noun 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'cityscapes' and to indicate general plural meaning. Use plural nouns when speaking about types or multiple instances. Suggestion: use 'landscapes' to be parallel with 'cityscapes'.

× For example, I often take photos of sunset or Mountain View to remember the trip and to stay with friends.

✓ For example, I often take photos of the sunset or mountain views to remember the trip and to share (them) with friends.

'Sunset' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific generic event: 'the sunset'. 'Mountain View' here seems to be a common noun phrase, so use 'mountain views' (plural) and lowercase. 'Stay with friends' is odd in context; likely 'share with friends' is intended. Suggestion: use 'the sunset' and 'mountain views' and replace 'stay with friends' with 'share with friends' or 'be with friends' depending on meaning.

× The urban skyline is vibrant in bustling so I haven't take photos of cityscape when I'm exploring new neighborhoods.

✓ The urban skyline is vibrant and bustling, so I often take photos of the cityscape when I'm exploring new neighborhoods.

Original has incorrect adverb/adjective order and wrong verb tense. 'Vibrant in bustling' is ungrammatical — use 'vibrant and bustling'. 'I haven't take' is incorrect form; should be 'I often take' or 'I haven't taken' depending on meaning. Context implies habitual action, so use 'I often take'. Also 'cityscape' should be preceded by 'the' or pluralized; here 'the cityscape' or 'cityscapes' works. Suggestion: use clear adjective coordination and correct verb forms for habitual actions.

× The countryside is man square and picture square and.

✓ The countryside is more spacious and picturesque.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and uses incorrect vocabulary ('man square', 'picture square'). Likely intended meaning is 'more spacious and picturesque'. Replace with adjectives that convey intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'spacious' and 'picturesque' to describe the countryside.

× I prefer views on my own country because there there are many interesting places where I can relax and travel before I go abroad.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because there are many interesting places where I can relax and travel before I go abroad.

Use preposition 'in' with 'country' ('in my country' or 'in my own country'), not 'on'. Also remove duplicate 'there'. Suggestion: use 'in my own country' and avoid repeated words.

× I especially let the countryside scenery in rural landscape I feel beautiful and unique.

✓ I especially like the countryside scenery; I feel it is beautiful and unique.

Original misuses verbs and sentence structure. 'Let' is incorrect here; likely intended 'like'. 'Countryside scenery in rural landscape' is redundant. Reformulate into two clauses: 'I especially like the countryside scenery' and 'I feel it is beautiful and unique.' Use pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'countryside scenery'. Suggestion: replace 'let' with 'like', remove redundancy, and add 'it' for clarity.