Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. As a photographer enthusiast is my favorite activity to take pictures everywhere, such as the beautiful scenery and and the corner around the cities. It has different views and I preferred it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer rural areas. It shows different scenery and it shows the beauty of nature. The Ruby areas only show the building and people around it around the cities so that's why I prefer rural areas areas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer the view in my countries. My country is big and have different kind of views and it's it's kind for us, for the photographer lovers and I can take different pictures and send it on the videos.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。注意主句结构和名词单复数,避免重复词汇。可以先用一句话明确表达喜好,然后用1–2句具体补充(如拍摄地点、拍摄动机或常用设备),并用连词连接,使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I often shoot both landscapes and interesting urban corners because I enjoy capturing varied scenes and moods. For example, I use a wide-angle lens for landscapes and a 50mm lens for city details.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并避免重复和拼写错误(例如“Ruby”应为“urban”)。先给出偏好并说明理由,使用连接词(because, while, however)展开对比,提供具体例子(如山脉、田野或市区的特色)以增强内容。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they offer natural landscapes like rolling hills and quiet fields, which I find more peaceful. While urban areas have interesting architecture and street life, I usually choose the countryside for its colors and tranquility.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 表达要更准确、语法正确并用更具体的细节说明原因。先明确偏好,然后给出两到三点具体原因(例如多样的气候、独特的景点或文化场景),最后可用一句话补充如何分享或利用这些照片。避免重复词和不连贯的短语。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide range of landscapes, from coastal beaches to mountains and historic towns. These diverse scenes give me more creative options as a photographer, and I often compile my best shots into short videos to share online.
× As a photographer enthusiast is my favorite activity to take pictures everywhere, such as the beautiful scenery and and the corner around the cities.
✓ As a photography enthusiast, taking pictures everywhere — such as of beautiful scenery and city corners — is my favorite activity.
句子结构混乱:原句少了主语与动词之间的连贯关系,且“不定式 + 名词”的搭配错误。建议把“photographer enthusiast”改为习惯用法“photography enthusiast”,并用动名词短语“taking pictures”作为主语,清晰表达“……是我最喜欢的活动”。此外删除多余的“and”。
× It has different views and I preferred it.
✓ It has different views and I prefer it.
时态/语态使用不当:原句中“preferred”为过去式,但谈论的是一般喜好,应使用一般现在时“prefer”。建议用一般现在时表示习惯或偏好。
× It shows different scenery and it shows the beauty of nature.
✓ They show varied scenery and the beauty of nature.
代词与名词单复数不一致且重复表达:原句用“It”指代风景不够恰当,风景应用复数或不可数名词。将“It shows”改为“They show”或用复数名词“scenery”并合并句子更自然。
× The Ruby areas only show the building and people around it around the cities so that's why I prefer rural areas areas.
✓ Urban areas only show buildings and people around the cities, so that's why I prefer rural areas.
词汇错误与结构重复:原句中“The Ruby areas”显然是拼写或词汇错误,应为“urban areas”;“building”应用复数“buildings”;有重复“around it around the cities”和“双重‘areas’”。建议修正为“Urban areas only show buildings and people around the cities, so I prefer rural areas.”
× I prefer the view in my countries.
✓ I prefer the views in my country.
名词与代词数的一致性错误:原句中“countries”与“my”指向单一国家不一致,且“view”建议用复数“views”表示多种景观。若指多个国家应改为“my countries”。本句应为“I prefer the views in my country.”
× My country is big and have different kind of views and it's it's kind for us, for the photographer lovers and I can take different pictures and send it on the videos.
✓ My country is big and has many kinds of views; it's great for photography lovers, and I can take different pictures and put them in videos.
主谓一致与词形错误:原句“My country is big and have”中主语是单数“country”,谓语应为“has”;“different kind of”应为复数形式“many kinds of”或“different kinds of”;“it's it's kind for us”表达不自然,应改为“it's great for photography lovers”;“send it on the videos”应改为更自然的“put them in videos”。建议注意主谓一致、可数名词的单复数以及固定搭配。