Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, give a clear topic sentence and one or two concise supporting reasons with linking words. Aim for natural phrasing and correct tense and pronoun use. For example, start with a direct statement, then explain briefly why you prefer to enjoy moments and mention one short example or consequence. Avoid filler sounds (umm, uh) and repeated words.

Ví dụ: I don't really like taking photos; I'd rather enjoy moments in person because stopping to take pictures can break the atmosphere. For example, when I'm at a sunset on the beach, I prefer watching the view with friends instead of photographing it, so I feel more relaxed and present.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and precise: use a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details linked logically. Correct grammar (singular/plural agreement) and avoid repeating the same adjective. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however'.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the natural scenery helps me relax and clear my mind. For instance, walking through a quiet countryside trail calms me down, whereas city views are often crowded and noisy, which I find stressful.

Gợi ý: Avoid vague praise and repetition; give a concise, coherent answer with specific reasons or examples. Start with a direct statement and then provide concrete reasons (e.g., familiar culture, accessible places) and one example. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid exaggerated or unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the culture and many beautiful natural sites are easy to reach. For example, I can visit nearby green valleys and national parks on weekends, which makes exploring home scenery convenient and enjoyable.

× I try to enjoy a moment rather than umm, rather than just stop myself and taking pictures and I am.

✓ I try to enjoy the moment rather than stop and take pictures.

The original uses an incorrect verb form 'stop myself and taking pictures' after 'rather than'. After 'rather than' use the base form 'stop and take' not 'taking'. Also 'a moment' is less natural than 'the moment' in this context. Revise to 'stop and take pictures' for correct parallel structure and verb form. Suggestion: Use parallel base verbs after 'rather than' (e.g., 'rather than stop and take').

× I can't take photos from uh, better angle.

✓ I can't take photos from a better angle.

Missing article 'a' before 'better angle' is an article error and affects noun phrase. Use 'a better angle' to indicate an unspecified single angle. Also 'from a better angle' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Always include the appropriate article before singular countable nouns.

× I have tried it before but I can't do it.

✓ I tried it before, but I couldn't do it.

The first clause 'I have tried it before' is acceptable, but pairing present perfect with 'but I can't do it' mixes tenses awkwardly. Since the action refers to a past attempt, use past simple 'I tried' and past ability 'I couldn't' for consistency. Suggestion: Keep past actions and their results in past tense for clarity.

× So I give up. It gave up.

✓ So I gave up.

'It gave up' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to their own action; use 'I gave up'. Also 'So I give up' is present tense while the context describes a past decision; use past tense 'I gave up'. Suggestion: Ensure subject matches the action and tenses are consistent.

× I prefer to say rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

'Prefer to say' is incorrect; 'prefer' should directly take the noun phrase. The extra 'to say' is unnecessary. Use 'I prefer rural areas' for a concise statement of preference. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' + noun or 'prefer to' + verb, not 'prefer to say'.

× This is because the natural area here refresh my mind and the beauty of rural areas is very refreshing.

✓ This is because the natural areas here refresh my mind, and the beauty of rural areas is very refreshing.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'natural area here refresh my mind' should be 'areas...refresh my mind' since 'areas' is plural. Also 'natural area' vs 'natural areas' consistency. 'Refresh' must agree with plural subject. The rest is acceptable though repetitive; consider rephrasing to avoid using 'refreshing' twice. Suggestion: Match singular/plural subjects with correct verb forms and avoid repeated adjectives.

× Also. On the other hand, urban areas is very crowded so I don't like that views.

✓ On the other hand, urban areas are very crowded, so I don't like those views.

Subject-verb agreement: 'urban areas is' should be 'urban areas are' because 'areas' is plural. Pronoun error: 'that views' should be 'those views' to match plural noun. Also remove the stray 'Also.' at the start. Suggestion: Use plural verb forms with plural nouns and use 'those' for plural demonstratives.

× As I am a patriotic man, so I always prefer to views in my countries and our country is a beauty is a natural beauty center here.

✓ As I am a patriotic man, I always prefer views in my country; our country is naturally beautiful.

Multiple errors: 'prefer to views' is incorrect verb-object structure; use 'prefer views' or 'prefer to view'. 'My countries' is wrong if referring to a single country; use 'my country'. The clause 'our country is a beauty is a natural beauty center here' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Simplify to 'our country is naturally beautiful.' Suggestion: Use correct verb-object patterns ('prefer views' or 'prefer to visit'), use singular/plural consistently, and avoid redundant phrases.

× Our country is another name is queen of all beauties.

✓ Our country is called the queen of beauty.

The original phrase is ungrammatical: 'another name is queen of all beauties' misorders and repeats 'is'. A natural expression is 'called the queen of beauty' or 'the queen of all beauties'. Suggestion: Use standard expressions like 'called the queen of beauty' and avoid literal translations.

× I'm going to have totally green and there's a lot of place to visit.

✓ It is very green, and there are many places to visit.

'I'm going to have totally green' is an incorrect structure; use 'It is totally green' or 'It is very green'. 'There's a lot of place' mixes singular/plural; use 'there are many places' for countable locations. Suggestion: Use 'there are' with plural nouns and replace awkward collocations with natural adjectives ('very green').

× So I love to prefer our own country.

✓ So I prefer our own country.

'Love to prefer' is redundant and incorrect; 'prefer' alone expresses the choice. Use 'I prefer our own country.' Suggestion: Avoid combining verbs that conflict in meaning; choose one clear verb (prefer/love).