Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures, uh, about different views. I like the natural sceneries. So when I travel to another place, I will take a lot of uh, pictures for the mountains, the plants or the peoples there, but I seldom take some selfies.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer rural areas because that gave me a sense of peace and calm. It leads me to focus on the scenery there, not about those guidelines, city towers. So when I was in royal areas, I will take my time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer reviews in other countries because this is the place where I grow and born, born and raised, so I was familiar with this scenery. But the views of other countries are exactly and obviously different, so I was appreciating those cultural differences.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意流利度和语法准确性,减少口头填充词(如 uh)。句子结构应更简洁自然,名词单复数和固定搭配需注意(例如 "natural scenery" 一般作不可数,"people" 不加定冠词用于泛指)。可以在主题句后用一两句具体细节并用连词衔接,使答案更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural scenery. When I travel, I usually take many photos of mountains, plants and local people, because I like capturing the atmosphere of a place rather than taking selfies.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意时态和词汇选择的准确性(例如应说 'gives me' 而不是 'gave me';'city towers' 可以说 'skyscrapers';'royal areas' 应为 'rural areas')。回答应有明确主题句,随后用连接词(e.g. because, so)提供具体理由并举例,避免语义模糊。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they give me a sense of peace and calm. For example, in the countryside I can focus on fields and rivers without the noise of skyscrapers, so I usually take my time to enjoy and photograph the surroundings.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 注意用词和语法(例如 'views' 而非 'reviews';'where I was born and raised' 或更自然 'where I was born and grew up';避免重复)。表达意图时可用更连贯的衔接词(e.g. because, however)并提供具体比较或例子来支持观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I grew up in my own country and am already familiar with its landscapes. For instance, I enjoy photographing foreign architecture and cultural scenes because they look different and offer fresh visual inspiration.
× Yes, I like taking pictures, uh, about different views.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
句中介词短语应使用“take pictures of”表示“拍……的照片”,而不是“about”。建议记住固定搭配“take pictures of”。
× I like the natural sceneries.
✓ I like natural scenery.
“scenery”通常为不可数名词,不用复数形式;“natural”作定语时不加冠词。建议将可数/不可数名词区分清楚,使用“scenery”。
× So when I travel to another place, I will take a lot of uh, pictures for the mountains, the plants or the peoples there, but I seldom take some selfies.
✓ So when I travel to another place, I take a lot of pictures of the mountains, the plants, or the people there, but I seldom take selfies.
1) 与景物拍照固定搭配为“take pictures of”;2) 一般现在时更合适用于习惯性动作,故用“take”而非“will take”;3) “people”为不可数/复数名词,应使用“people”而非“peoples”;4) “selfies”前不加不定量词“some”。建议使用一般现在时描述习惯并注意可数/不可数形式及固定搭配。
× I prefer rural areas because that gave me a sense of peace and calm.
✓ I prefer rural areas because they give me a sense of peace and calm.
句子主语是“rural areas”(复数),代词用“they”;时态应与现在偏好一致,用现在时“give”而不是过去时“gave”。建议主谓一致并保持时态一致。
× It leads me to focus on the scenery there, not about those guidelines, city towers.
✓ It helps me focus on the scenery there, not on things like street signs or city towers.
1) 动词“lead to”用法不如“help”自然;2) “focus on”后不加“to”;3) “not about those guidelines, city towers”结构混乱,应改为“not on things like ...”表达更清晰。建议使用正确动词短语并将否定对象放在“not on ...”结构中。
× So when I was in royal areas, I will take my time.
✓ So when I am in rural areas, I take my time.
1) “royal areas”显然拼写/用词错误,应为“rural areas”;2) 时态应与偏好描述一致,用一般现在时“am... take”或“am... I take my time”更自然;3) 混合过去时“was”与将来时“will”不合适。建议使用正确词汇并保持时态一致。
× I prefer reviews in other countries because this is the place where I grow and born, born and raised, so I was familiar with this scenery.
✓ I prefer views in other countries because my country is the place where I was born and raised, so I am familiar with its scenery.
1) “reviews”应为“views”;2) 表达出生和成长应使用被动短语“be born and raised”,并用过去时“was born and raised”;3) “this is the place where I grow and born”语序和时态错误,应改为“my country is the place where I was born and raised”;4) 描述熟悉程度用现在时“am familiar”。建议使用正确名词和被动结构并区分时态。
× But the views of other countries are exactly and obviously different, so I was appreciating those cultural differences.
✓ But the views in other countries are noticeably different, so I appreciate those cultural differences.
1) “exactly and obviously different”用词冗余且搭配不自然,可改为“noticeably different”或“clearly different”;2) “I was appreciating”时态不当,感受持续用现在时“appreciate”;3) “the views of other countries”可简化为“views in other countries”。建议用常见搭配并保持时态一致(现在时描述常态或偏好)。