Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh, um, maybe) and grammatical errors. Use linking words (for example, however) to contrast different views. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, I like capturing colorful sunsets and busy city streets to show different moods. However, some views, such as industrial sites, are less attractive to me, so I focus on natural or historic scenes instead.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons linked by connectors (because, while, furthermore). Avoid repetition and grammatical mistakes (use singular/plural correctly). Limit to three sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes and cleaner air, which I find more relaxing. While urban areas have lively streets and modern architecture, rural scenery such as fields and rivers feels more connected to nature. Therefore, I usually choose the countryside for taking photos and relaxing walks.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (I prefer X) and support with a clear, specific example. Correct grammar (use 'contains', 'many', 'tourists') and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for instance, such as) to list examples. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many historical sites that I love. For instance, Egypt contains landmarks like the pyramids and the Mediterranean coastline in Alexandria, which attract many foreign tourists. These places make me proud of my country’s heritage.

× Yeah, I love it. Uh, it's make me maybe so how so, uh, beautiful.

✓ Yeah, I love it. Uh, it makes me feel very happy; the views are so beautiful.

Original uses 'it's make' which is incorrect verb form and missing object: after 'it' the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular) and 'feel' is needed to express emotional effect. Also 'maybe so how so' is unclear and informal; replace with 'very happy' and 'the views are so beautiful' for clarity and correctness. Grammar Problem Type ID: 10;

× And so in some views and, uh, another views maybe, uh, a terrible ship.

✓ Some views are beautiful, while others can be quite terrible.

Sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Another views' should be 'other views' and 'a terrible ship' makes no sense in context. Rephrase to contrast positive and negative views with a clear subject and verb. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26;

× So yeah, it's very good. I agree with this.

✓ So yeah, I really enjoy it; I agree with that.

'It's very good' is vague; 'I really enjoy it' fits question about liking photography. 'I agree with this' is awkward; 'I agree with that' or 'I agree' is better. Adjust for natural sentence structure and meaning. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26;

× Rural areas is very, very beautiful, uh, places.

✓ Rural areas are very, very beautiful places.

Subject 'Rural areas' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'. Also avoid comma before 'places'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 27;

× It's uh, the nature of, uh, of environment, uh, umm, maybe urban areas suitable for other people, uh, but umm, rural area is the nature of, of human.

✓ It's the natural environment. Maybe urban areas are suitable for some people, but rural areas reflect human nature.

Fragmented and repetitive phrasing needs consolidation. Use 'the natural environment' for clarity. 'Urban areas suitable' needs verb 'are'. Use plural 'rural areas' to match context. 'Nature of human' should be 'reflect human nature' for correct expression. Grammar Problem Type ID: 17;

× So I choose the rural areas. It's very good places to.

✓ So I choose rural areas. They are very good places to visit.

'I choose the rural areas' can omit 'the' but acceptable; main issue: 'It's very good places to' uses singular 'it' with plural 'places' and lacks verb. Correct to 'They are very good places to visit' to match plural subject and complete the infinitive. Grammar Problem Type ID: 27;

× Like my vision in my country, it's contain a number of views like pyramids and Alexandria cities which contain sea number of of foreign foreign tourists come to see our ancient.

✓ In my country, there are many sights such as the pyramids and the city of Alexandria, which attract a large number of foreign tourists who come to see our ancient sites.

Original has multiple errors: 'Like my vision' is unclear, 'it's contain' should be 'there are' (There be issue) but main fix uses clear subject-verb structure. 'Alexandria cities' incorrect; use 'the city of Alexandria'. 'Contain sea number of of foreign foreign tourists come' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Rephrase to 'attract a large number of foreign tourists who come to see our ancient sites' for clarity and correctness. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26;