Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many irrelevant phrases. Give a direct, concise response (1 topic sentence) and 1–2 supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and specific reasons or examples. Keep answers under five sentences. For example, state whether you like taking pictures, explain why (e.g. mood, memory, composition), and give a brief example of a favourite subject.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they capture the atmosphere of a place and preserve memories. For instance, I often photograph mountain landscapes at sunrise to capture warm light and dramatic shadows, which makes the scene feel peaceful and timeless.

Gợi ý: Your response answers the question but is grammatically incorrect and short on supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a linked reason and a brief example. Use correct pronouns and articles (e.g. "I prefer rural areas").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy photographing natural landscapes like mountains and fields. For example, I like hiking to a hilltop at sunset to capture wide panoramas and peaceful skies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but needs clearer grammar and more specific detail. State your preference directly, give a reason using linking words (because/so), and add a brief example or contrast. Use correct noun phrases ("my own country" and "other countries").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the best spots and cultural context, so I can capture meaningful scenes. For example, I know a coastal village where local festivals create colorful photo opportunities that I wouldn't find elsewhere.

× Hello, are you enjoying taking pictures from Britain youth processing mountains and city states because they capture the mood of our place and also sometimes follow up about the subjects on TV or switch to when they can't play on.

✓ Hello. I enjoy taking pictures of mountains, countryside, and city scenes in Britain because they capture the mood of a place, and sometimes I follow up on subjects I see on TV or switch to other subjects when I cannot photograph my original idea.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: unclear phrases ('Britain youth processing'), incorrect prepositions ('pictures from' should be 'pictures of'), run-on clauses, and vague references ('they', 'switch to when they can't play on'). Break the sentence into clearer parts, use correct prepositions ('of' for subjects of photos), replace unclear nouns with intended meanings ('mountains, countryside, and city scenes'), and clarify the second idea with correct verbs and conjunctions. Suggestion: separate ideas into simple clauses, ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb, and use precise nouns.

× I prefer you in rural areas because I'd like to take photos of the the mountains now.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I'd like to take photos of the mountains now.

The use of 'you' is incorrect; the student likely meant 'I prefer (being) in' or simply 'I prefer rural areas.' Remove the incorrect pronoun and redundant article ('the the'). Ensure subject matches meaning: use 'I prefer rural areas' to express preference. Also, 'now' is acceptable if intending present time, but could be omitted for general preference.

× I prefer to my own places because it is different than other country.

✓ I prefer my own country because it is different from other countries.

Errors include incorrect use of the preposition with 'prefer' ('prefer to my own places' is wrong) and wrong comparisons. Use 'prefer my own country' or 'prefer my own places.' For comparison, use 'different from' rather than 'different than' in standard usage, and pluralize 'country' to 'countries' when comparing to other nations. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'it is' is ok if referring to 'my country'.