Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or an example using a linking word. Focus on correct verb forms and singular/plural. For example, replace “create memories” with “creating memories,” remove duplicate words, and use connectors like “because” or “so” correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture memories. For example, when I visited the coast last year, I photographed the sunset to remember the colours and the peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Give a direct clear preference in one sentence, then support it with a specific reason and a linking word. Avoid awkward repetition and incorrect phrases like “mountains specially located in the urban areas.” Use singular/plural correctly and mention a concrete detail (e.g., skyline, architecture, accessibility).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy city skylines and the contrast of historic and modern architecture. For instance, I like photographing rooftop views where I can capture both tall buildings and bustling streets below.

Gợi ý: Avoid negative or potentially sensitive statements about your country and be specific. State a balanced opinion: give a clear preference, explain why with a neutral reason, and provide an example. Correct grammar (e.g., “other countries’ views,” “there is so much chaos,” or better: “busy streets”). Keep it polite and concise.

Ví dụ: I like views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different cultures and landscapes. For example, when I travelled to Japan, I was fascinated by the tidy streets and gardens, which were quite different from what I usually see at home.

× I love traveling and create memories so I do like taking pictures of different different views but because according to me if we taking pictures of anything that creates a memory that creates a emotion that shows an emotion.

✓ I love traveling and creating memories, so I do like taking pictures of different views, because, in my opinion, taking pictures of something creates a memory and an emotion.

The sentence incorrectly mixes base verb form 'create' with 'traveling' and uses 'we taking' instead of the gerund or correct auxiliary form. Use parallel gerunds after 'love' (traveling and creating). Use 'taking' correctly and avoid repeated words. Use 'in my opinion' for 'according to me', and 'an emotion' for correct article usage. Suggestions: use gerunds for activities (traveling, creating, taking), remove duplicate words, and use 'in my opinion' or 'I think'. Use 'an' before a noun starting with a vowel sound.

× I love mountains and mountains specially located in the urban areas, so I love to take. I love to. I love the view of urban area more than rural area.

✓ I love mountains, especially those located in urban areas, so I prefer the view of urban areas to that of rural areas.

The sentence repeats 'mountains' and misuses 'specially' (use 'especially') and has sentence fragments ('I love to take. I love to.'). Also 'urban area' vs 'rural area' need plural or definite forms for comparison. Use 'prefer X to Y' or 'prefer the view of urban areas to rural areas' for correct comparison and smoother phrasing. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use 'especially', complete sentences, and use comparative structures like 'prefer X to Y'.

× I love the view of my country also but I prefer other country view other countries view as well because in my country there are so so much of chaos just because of multiple people religion.

✓ I love the view of my country, but I also prefer the views of other countries because there is so much chaos in my country due to the presence of many different religions.

Problems include missing articles ('other country view' should be 'views of other countries'), incorrect phrase 'so so much of chaos' (use 'so much chaos' or 'a lot of chaos'), and awkward 'multiple people religion' (should be 'many different religions' or 'multiple religions'). Also use 'there is' for uncountable noun 'chaos'. Suggestions: use 'the views of other countries', replace 'so so much of chaos' with 'so much chaos', and say 'many different religions'.