Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence followed by one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition ("to look at after" and "to look"). Add a linking word if you give a second supporting point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they preserve memories of places I visit. For example, I often photograph sunsets so I can remember the colours and atmosphere later.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, reduce hesitations, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because/so). Avoid repeating phrases ("in the rural areas").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the natural scenery is more peaceful and there is less air and noise pollution. For instance, I find mountain landscapes and open fields much more relaxing than crowded city streets.

Gợi ý: Give a concise topic sentence and one clear reason with a brief example. Remove fillers like "umm" and avoid repeating ideas ("I really like to explore" and "it is really an enjoyable time").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultures and landscapes that I haven’t seen before. For example, visiting Japan allowed me to photograph traditional temples and cherry blossoms, which felt very different from sights at home.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think that it is lovely to look at after and it is a great memory to have and to look.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think they are lovely to look at afterwards and they are great memories to have.

The sentence uses singular pronouns 'it' to refer to plural 'pictures' and repeats awkward phrasing. Change 'it' to 'they' to match plural 'pictures' (pronoun agreement) and use 'afterwards' for natural adverb placement. Also simplify 'a great memory to have and to look' to 'great memories to have' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Umm I prefer views in the rural areas because I like to look at it in nature and I think it is more relaxing and refreshing umm in the rural areas compared to an urban area and it is it has less pollution.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I like seeing nature, and I think it is more relaxing and refreshing in rural areas compared to urban areas because there is less pollution.

Use 'in rural areas' without 'the' for general reference. Replace 'look at it in nature' with 'seeing nature' for natural verb usage. Use plural 'urban areas' to match comparison. Replace 'it has less pollution' with 'there is less pollution' to correctly express existence of pollution in places (There be issue and preposition/structure improvement). Remove repeated words and filler 'umm' for clarity.

× I prefer views in other countries because, umm, in my own country I've always seen it and I really like to explore and to travel to different countries and I've been to a lot of countries and it is really an enjoyable time for me to go to.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I have already seen many of the views in my own country, and I really like exploring and travelling to different countries. I have been to a lot of countries, and it is really enjoyable for me to travel.

Replace singular 'it' with clear references ('many of the views') to match plural. Use consistent verb forms: 'I have already seen' (present perfect) fits the context. Use gerunds 'exploring' and 'travelling' for natural parallel structure. Simplify the final clause to 'it is really enjoyable for me to travel' to avoid awkward phrasing and pronoun errors. Remove filler 'umm' for clarity.