Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like talking picture of different views.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer music is rural area.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer viewing our country.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Pronunciation and grammar need correction. Use correct verb form and article: say "taking pictures" not "talking picture". Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details (what kinds of views you like and why). Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences).
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset because the light creates dramatic colors, and I also capture countryside landscapes to show peaceful scenes.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: This answer has incorrect words and grammar and is unclear. Decide on one preference (urban or rural), state it directly, and give a reason using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "because of"). Keep to 1–2 sentences and use correct nouns (e.g., "rural areas").
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy wide open spaces and natural scenery. For instance, I like photographing fields and mountains since they feel calm and colorful.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: The idea is understandable but phrasing is awkward. Use "my country" instead of "our country" and a clearer structure: state your preference, then give a specific reason or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example."
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my country because I am familiar with the best spots and local seasons. For example, I often photograph coastal cliffs near my hometown which look especially beautiful in autumn.
× Yes, I like talking picture of different views.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
The student used 'talking' instead of the gerund 'taking' required after 'like' when expressing a preference for an activity; also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views'. Suggestion: use the verb 'take' in its -ing form ('taking') after 'like' and use plural nouns when referring to multiple items ('pictures'). Grammar problem type's ID:8
× I prefer music is rural area.
✓ I prefer rural areas.
The sentence is ungrammatical: 'music is rural area' is irrelevant and incorrect. The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the noun phrase that is preferred. Use the adjective 'rural' with the plural noun 'areas' to match the question asking about 'urban areas or rural areas'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer rural areas.' for clarity and grammatical correctness. Grammar problem type's ID:13
× I prefer viewing our country.
✓ I prefer views in our country.
The answer 'I prefer viewing our country' is awkward: 'viewing' followed by 'our country' suggests physically watching the country rather than preferring scenes located in it. The question asked 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?' so a direct, parallel noun phrase is better: 'views in our country.' Suggestion: match the structure of the question by using 'views in our country' or 'views in my country.' Grammar problem type's ID:12