Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Correct grammar (comfort → comfortable; tense and article mistakes) and avoid redundancy. Aim for 2–4 sentences, use a variety of vocabulary related to emotions and photography.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love being in nature. For example, photographing a mountain or a lake calms me down, and when I feel stressed I often look at these photos to relax.

Gợi ý: Clarify your preference and use accurate vocabulary. The student's reasoning is confusing (urban views described as natural and clean). Decide which you prefer and give specific, logical reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Correct collocations (e.g., "breathtaking views", "fresh air"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and scenic. For instance, the countryside offers breathtaking landscapes and fresh air, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical response stating preference and supporting reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., "I prefer those in my own country", "there are many beautiful places in Nepal"). Be specific about examples (mountains, villages) and explain briefly why they matter to you (familiarity, culture, accessibility). Use 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has many beautiful places I know well. For example, the mountains and traditional villages are breathtaking and feel comforting because they remind me of home.

× I really like to take a picture of different views because I really love nature and taking pictures makes me so comfort and if I fail sometime if I feel sad or frustrated I look at that picture. Long as you feel good.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views because I love nature and taking pictures makes me feel comforted; if I ever feel sad or frustrated, I look at those pictures as long as they make me feel better.

Error type 8: 'taking pictures makes me so comfort' uses 'comfort' (a noun) instead of the correct verb/adjective forms. Use the gerund 'taking' for the hobby and the adjective/verb phrase 'make me feel comforted' or 'make me feel better'. Also corrected plural consistency ('pictures') and sentence structure for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'like taking' rather than 'like to take' for general preference, use plural 'pictures' when referring to multiple images, and use 'make me feel comforted' or 'make me feel better' to express emotional effect.

× I prefer views in urban areas because in urban areas they are so natural. The views are the breathtaking, the breath is phrased, the air is phased out, everything looks so nice and clean rather than rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they feel so refreshing. The views are breathtaking, the air is fresh, and everything looks nicer and cleaner than in rural areas.

Error type 13: Incorrect or awkward adjective/adverb choices and phrase forms: 'so natural' is odd for urban areas; 'the views are the breathtaking' has an unnecessary article and wrong form; 'the breath is phrased' and 'the air is phased out' are incorrect phrases. Also corrected comparative structure 'nicer and cleaner than in rural areas.' Suggestion: Use clear adjectives like 'breathtaking' and 'fresh' and compare using 'than' with the noun omitted ('than in rural areas'). Avoid invented phrases like 'breath is phrased'.

× I prefer you in my own country because they are there are so many best taking place in Nepal with nobody have seen the mountains, the hills, the villages.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because there are many beautiful places in Nepal that people have not seen, like the mountains, the hills, and the villages.

Error type 12: Incorrect pronoun and sentence structure: 'I prefer you' is wrong—should be 'I prefer views.' 'They are there are' is redundant. 'Nobody have seen' uses incorrect pronoun and verb agreement; 'nobody' is singular and should take 'has' if used, but better to rephrase as 'people have not seen.' Also 'best taking place' is incorrect; use 'beautiful places.' Suggestion: Use the correct object ('views'), remove redundancy, and use proper subject-verb agreement: 'people have not seen' or 'nobody has seen.'

× They are so breathtaking and keep like home.

✓ They are so breathtaking and feel like home.

Error type 26: Awkward sentence structure and word choice: 'keep like home' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is that the places give a feeling of home, so 'feel like home' is correct. Suggestion: Use verbs that express sensation for places: 'feel like home' or 'make me feel at home.'