Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
No, I took photos really and be honestly, I don't like take photo because it's actually nothing to talk.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
To be honestly, I prefer rural areas to urban areas because I can feel the smoke life and it's really happy when I was in.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
In my own country it's named China, it has 5000 years civilization and I'm proud of my Chinese identity.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 用更自然和简洁的句子直接回答问题,并提供一到两句具体原因或例子来支撑观点。注意时态和语法(例如不要把动词原形和过去式混用),并控制在不超过5句。可以使用衔接词如because或so来连接想法。
Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely take photos because I don't find many scenes interesting enough to photograph, and I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than document it.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答时要用自然的表达并给出具体原因或对比。纠正常见表达错误(例如 say "to be honest" 而不是 "to be honestly",用正确的时态和短语,如 "simple life" 或 "slower pace of life"),并尽量提供一两个具体细节来支持观点。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the slower pace of life and cleaner air; for example, I like walking by rice fields and chatting with friendly neighbors.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 直接回答偏好并给出具体理由。当前回答偏离问题主题(更像是讲历史或身份),应说明你更喜欢国内还是国外的景色,并解释原因,比如文化熟悉、自然风光或历史遗迹。用一两句具体例子支持观点并注意句子通顺。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the culture and landscapes; for instance, I love visiting ancient temples and scenic mountains in China that remind me of our long history.
× No, I took photos really and be honestly, I don't like take photo because it's actually nothing to talk.
✓ No, I don't really take photos, and to be honest, I don't like taking photos because there's actually nothing to talk about.
问题类型(ID 26、8、22、11):句子结构错误、动词+‑ing 形式、冠词/可数名词使用错误、介词使用错误。原句中时态和结构混乱(I took photos really and be honestly 不自然),应使用一般现在时表达习惯(I don't really take photos)。动词短语后面应使用不定式或动名词;在这里表示喜欢/不喜欢做某事,应使用动名词 taking。可数名词 photo 需要复数或加冠词,这里用复数 photos。短语 nothing to talk 错误,正确说法为 nothing to talk about(介词 about 省略会使表达不完整)。建议:用简单的现在时描述习惯,喜欢/不喜欢后接动名词,注意可数名词复数或冠词,并保留必要介词。
× To be honestly, I prefer rural areas to urban areas because I can feel the smoke life and it's really happy when I was in.
✓ To be honest, I prefer rural areas to urban areas because I can feel the slow (or peaceful) life there, and I'm really happy when I'm there.
问题类型(ID 13、26、6、5、11):副词/形容词使用错误、句子结构错误、现在时与过去时混用、介词/副词位置错误。原句中的 to be honestly 应为常用短语 to be honest(副词形态错误)。短语 the smoke life 无意义,猜测是想表达“悠闲/慢节奏的生活”,应改为 slow life 或 peaceful life。句尾时态前后不一致,because 描述一般事实应使用现在时 when I'm there,而不是过去时 when I was in。介词 in 用法不当,通常用 there 表示“在那儿”。建议:使用固定搭配 to be honest;描述常态用一般现在时;用 there 指代地点,并用合适形容词描述生活节奏。
× In my own country it's named China, it has 5000 years civilization and I'm proud of my Chinese identity.
✓ My own country is called China; it has a 5,000‑year civilization, and I'm proud of my Chinese identity.
问题类型(ID 17、22、26、1):定冠词/用法错误、冠词与名词搭配错误、句子结构错误、单复数问题(years 与复合数词搭配)。原句中 it's named China 用法生硬,英语中更自然说 My country is called China 或 It's called China。civilization 前需要数词和连字符的修饰 a 5,000‑year civilization(表示‘有五千年文明’),缺少不定冠词 a。also 建议用分号或逗号连接句子,使结构更清晰。建议:用被动或主动的自然表达(is called),在表示年数的名词前使用 a + 数字‑year + 单数名词,并注意标点使句子更流畅。