Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response grammatically correct, more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'it have'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' appropriately.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture beautiful scenery and memories. For example, when I visited a coastal town last year, I photographed the sunrise over the sea to remember that peaceful morning.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer (I prefer X) and support it with one or two clear, specific reasons. Correct word choice (use 'prefer urban areas' not 'using') and grammar ('they have' or 'there are'). Remove hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' for coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because many cities combine modern architecture with green spaces. For instance, my city has riverside parks and tree-lined boulevards that help me relax and think clearly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific reason with an example. Avoid vague or awkward phrases like 'You can't even think deeply.' Use natural phrasing to describe what makes your country's views special, and keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, the Philippines, because of its dramatic landscapes of mountains and islands. For example, the terraced rice fields and coastal vistas I visited last year were unforgettable and perfect for landscape photos.

× Yes, I like taking pictures with the different views because it have so many beautiful sceneries and I'd like to take a memories that I've been there.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because there are so many beautiful scenes, and I'd like to take memories of places I've been to.

Multiple errors: 'with the different views' uses wrong preposition/article — use 'of different views' (preposition and article). 'it have' shows subject-verb agreement error and wrong subject — use 'there are' for existence. 'sceneries' is uncountable/plural misuse; use 'scenes' or 'scenery' (prefer 'scenes'). 'take a memories' mixes singular article with plural noun — use 'take memories' or 'take a memory' but better 'take photos as memories' or 'keep memories of places I've been to'. 'that I've been there' is redundant and incorrect clause order; say 'places I've been to'. Suggestions: use 'there are' for existence, 'of' for taking pictures, correct noun forms and prepositions, and avoid redundant words.

× I prefer using the urban areas because it has beautiful landscapes and and so many trees and natures that I can't I can think deep deeply.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they have beautiful landscapes, many trees, and natural surroundings that help me think more deeply.

Errors: 'prefer using the urban areas' — 'using' is unnecessary; say 'prefer urban areas'. 'it has' disagrees with plural 'areas' — use 'they have'. 'and and' is a typing duplication. 'natures' is incorrect plural; use 'nature' or 'natural surroundings'. Phrase 'I can't I can think deep deeply' is ungrammatical and contradictory; likely meant 'help me think more deeply' — use adverb 'more deeply' after verb. Suggestions: match plural subjects with plural verbs, remove unnecessary 'using', use 'nature' or 'natural surroundings', place adverbs after verbs and avoid contradictions.

× I prefer views in my country here in the Philippines because it has so many mountains and islands and it has breathtaking sceneries. You can't even think deeply.

✓ I prefer views in my country, the Philippines, because it has so many mountains and islands and breathtaking scenery. You can't help but think deeply.

Errors: 'my country here in the Philippines' is wordy; better 'my country, the Philippines'. 'it has so many mountains and islands and it has breathtaking sceneries' repeats 'it has' and uses 'sceneries' which is nonstandard; use singular uncountable 'scenery' or 'breathtaking scenery' and avoid repetition by combining clauses. 'You can't even think deeply' is unclear and likely incorrect idiom; a clearer expression is 'You can't help but think deeply' meaning the views inspire deep thought. Suggestions: combine clauses to avoid repetition, use 'scenery' not 'sceneries', and choose idiomatic expressions like 'can't help but'.