Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Уменьшите заполнители (umm, uh) и сделайте ответ короче и более естественным. Начинайте с чётного тематического предложения, затем приведите одно конкретное объяснение или пример. Используйте более естественные выражения (e.g. "capture moments") и избегайте громоздких конструкций.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me capture important moments of my life. For example, I often photograph family gatherings so I can look back on them later.

Gợi ý: Избавьтесь от повтора и заполнителей, дайте чёткое утверждение, затем подкрепите его конкретной причиной и примером. Используйте связующие слова (for example, because) чтобы сделать ответ связным и логичным.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I live in the city and enjoy its energy. For example, I like photographing modern architecture and busy streets that show everyday life.

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ короче и избегайте эмоционально неопределённых слов как "perfect" без объяснения. Дайте конкретную причину и пример, используя связки (because, for example) и уберите лишние паузы и местоимения типа "I should say".

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong connection to its landscapes. For example, I enjoy photographing local forests and coastal areas that remind me of home.

× Yeah, I really like because, umm, with the help of when I take pictures, I can, uh, depict all the moments of my life that can be very memorable for me in the future.

✓ I really like taking pictures because when I take them, I can capture moments of my life that will be memorable in the future.

Use of verb + -ing: 'I really like because' is incorrect; after 'like' use a gerund when referring to the activity (taking pictures). 'With the help of when I take pictures' is ungrammatical and redundant; simplify to 'when I take them'. Use 'capture' instead of 'depict' for photographic context. Use future 'will be' to express that moments will be memorable later. Suggestion: Use 'I like taking pictures' and avoid redundant phrases.

× Umm, I should say that I prefer umm, more views in uh, urban area because I live in the city.

✓ I should say that I prefer more views in urban areas because I live in the city.

Singular and plural issue: 'urban area' should be plural ('urban areas') when speaking generally about that type of place. Use plural to match 'more views' which implies a general preference. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to general categories.

× I really like the vibe of it and umm, I think it's more modern, stylish.

✓ I really like the vibe, and I think it's more modern and stylish.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs: Missing conjunction between adjectives and a redundant comma before 'and'. Use 'and' to join coordinate adjectives describing the same noun. Suggestion: Connect adjectives with 'and' or use a comma if they independently modify the noun.

× I should say that I prefer, uh, the views of my own country because I'm a patriotic person.

✓ I should say that I prefer the views of my own country because I'm a patriotic person.

Article errors: Original sentence has unnecessary commas but article use is acceptable. Correction removes extraneous fillers for clarity. Suggestion: Remove filler words and unnecessary punctuation to improve fluency.

× Uh, I really like how our nature, umm, looks and every corner of my country is very perfect.

✓ I really like how our nature looks, and every corner of my country is beautiful.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs: 'very perfect' is incorrect collocation; 'perfect' generally doesn't take 'very' and sounds unnatural. Use 'beautiful' or 'very beautiful' to express praise. Also add conjunction and fix word order for clarity. Suggestion: Choose natural adjective collocations like 'beautiful' or 'perfect' without unnecessary modifiers.