Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid abbreviations like "pics", and give 1–2 concrete details about what kinds of views you prefer and why. Use linking words to make it coherent and keep it under 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs when I travel. For example, I often capture coastal sunsets and city skylines because the light and colours change a lot during the day. I also take close-up shots of interesting buildings or plants to remember details from each place.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference first, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "something different" and fragmented sentences. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views slightly more, but I also enjoy urban scenes. Rural areas feel peaceful and offer wide landscapes and natural colours, whereas cities provide interesting architecture and lively street life, so I often take pictures in both settings.

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent and provide a reason with a specific example. Use linking words such as "because" or "however" to connect ideas, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a stronger connection to the places I grew up in. For instance, I like photographing local mountains and traditional markets that remind me of family trips, although I also enjoy taking pictures abroad for variety.

× Yes, I like to take pics of different memories on view travel. Most of travel views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views when I travel. Mostly travel views.

The original contains word choice and structure errors: 'pics' is informal — use 'pictures'; 'different memories on view travel' is ungrammatical and unclear — use 'different views when I travel'; 'Most of travel views' is awkward — use 'Mostly travel views' or 'Mostly views from my travels'. Improve by using standard vocabulary and reorganizing the sentence to follow English word order (subject + verb + object) and common collocations (views when I travel).

× I think I might take both. Few cars, there's something different, right?

✓ I think I might take both. With fewer cars, there's something different, right?

'Few cars' is not properly connected to the sentence and should be 'fewer cars' to compare quantity (countable nouns). Also add 'With' to link the phrase to the main clause. This fixes sentence structure and makes the comparison clear. 'There's' (there is) is acceptable because 'something' is singular. Suggestion: use linking prepositions (e.g., 'with') and correct quantifier for countable nouns ('fewer' not 'few') to improve clarity.

× I think I prefer the view of my own country because I am more familiar with my country views.

✓ I prefer the views of my own country because I am more familiar with them.

This sentence is redundant ('my country views' repeats 'my country') and wordy. Replace with 'views of my own country' and use the pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'views'. This improves conciseness and pronoun reference. Also 'I think' is unnecessary and can be omitted for a firmer statement.