Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more fluent: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitation sounds (uh), correct grammar, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Limit to max 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and notice small details. For example, I often photograph wildlife and plants in local parks, which I then organise into themed albums. This hobby also motivates me to explore new outdoor areas and improves my patience when waiting for the right moment.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, then give specific reasons and a brief personal example using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Check grammar (e.g. 'to take photos of' not 'to take photo to take'). Keep it concise (3–4 sentences).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside feels calmer and more scenic. For example, when I visited my grandmother's village as a child, I was fascinated by the open fields and old trees, which inspired me to photograph landscapes. Because of that experience, I still enjoy capturing quiet natural scenes rather than busy streets.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer (prefer own country or other countries), correct grammar (use present perfect/generic forms: 'I haven't visited many foreign countries'), and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to show contrast. Avoid vague phrases like 'a lot of sound' or 'different youth'.

Ví dụ: I would prefer views from other countries because I haven't visited many foreign places and I enjoy discovering different cultures and landscapes. For instance, travelling abroad would let me photograph unique architecture and local festivals that I can't see at home. However, I also appreciate certain scenes in my own country, such as coastal sunsets, which I photograph often.

× I'm really keen on this. Uh, for me personally, it's one of it. It is one of the ways to relax. So in my gallery gallery, a lot of photos of wildlife and I'm.

✓ I'm really keen on it. For me personally, it's one of the ways I relax. In my gallery, there are a lot of photos of wildlife.

The sentence 'it's one of it' is incorrect because 'one of' requires a plural noun ('one of the ways'), and the phrasing was awkward; this is a sentence structure and article/verb omission issue. Also 'So in my gallery gallery, a lot of photos of wildlife and I'm' is fragmented and missing a verb and contains repetition. Correct by using 'it' for 'keen on it', 'one of the ways I relax' to complete the idea, and 'In my gallery, there are a lot of photos of wildlife' to provide a complete clause with proper subject-verb agreement and article placement. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I prefer to take photo to take views of rural areas.

✓ I prefer to take photos of rural areas.

The phrase 'to take photo to take views' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use the plural 'photos' for general preference (singular/plural issue) and a single verb phrase 'to take photos of rural areas'. Alternatively use gerund: 'I prefer taking photos of rural areas.' Ensure correct noun number and avoid duplicate verbs.

× It feels more comfortable for me personally and when I was a child, I visited my grandmother's village and it was fascinating time for me.

✓ It feels more comfortable for me personally, and when I was a child I visited my grandmother's village; it was a fascinating time for me.

The original sentence lacked an article before 'fascinating time' and had punctuation issues. 'A fascinating time' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also improve flow by adding commas or a semicolon. Ensure past events use past tense consistently (visited, was) and include necessary articles.

× I don't visited a lot of abroad countries, so it's still interesting for me to see a lot of sound, a lot of different youth.

✓ I haven't visited many foreign countries, so it's still interesting for me to see many different places and cultures abroad.

'I don't visited' mixes present negative with past form; use present perfect 'I haven't visited' to indicate experience up to now. 'A lot of abroad countries' is incorrect word order and choice; use 'many foreign countries' or 'abroad' after the noun. 'A lot of sound, a lot of different youth' is unclear and incorrect; likely meant 'many different places and cultures.' Use appropriate nouns and quantifiers. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences and correct adjective ('foreign') and clearer vocabulary.

× I think I can always find something new abroad.

✓ I think I can always find something new abroad.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses correct pronoun and verb forms and fits the context. Included here to indicate no error under the provided problem types.