Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar: use singular/plural correctly, avoid redundancy, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details linked smoothly. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., "landscapes" vs "views"). Watch verb tenses and article use. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't usually take photos of every view because I prefer being present in the moment. For example, when I go hiking, I focus on sensations like the scent of wildflowers and the sound of birds, which helps me relax. Occasionally I take one or two pictures to remember the place.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitation noises (uh), and correct vocabulary (e.g., "tall trees" not "toad trees"). Use linking words for coherence and give one specific example. Reduce repetition and unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer experiences I don't get in the city. For instance, the countryside has fresh air, colorful wildflowers and tall trees, and its relaxed atmosphere helps me unwind after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific, well-linked reasons. Improve grammar (capitalization, articles, plural forms) and clarity ("entering and graduation ceremony" unclear—say "entrance and graduation ceremonies"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid short fragmented remarks like "I recall that."

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because we experience four distinct seasons, each with its own charm. I especially love spring, when cherry blossoms bloom and people celebrate entrance and graduation ceremonies, which makes the season feel festive and memorable.

× I don't like photographing each landscapes because I prefer to spend time focusing on the environment where I'm in right now rather than taking picture of those.

✓ I don't like photographing each landscape because I prefer to spend time focusing on the environment I'm in right now rather than taking pictures of those.

Errors: 'each landscapes' mixes singular determiner with plural noun; 'taking picture of those' uses singular 'picture' where plural 'pictures' is needed. Rule: after 'each' use singular (landscape). Also when referring to multiple items use plural 'pictures'. Suggestion: use 'each landscape' and 'pictures' to match number and use natural phrasing 'the environment I'm in' without extra 'where'.

× For example, when I go to hiking, I would choose to enjoy the natural sceneries such as smell of the flower which helped me relax.

✓ For example, when I go hiking, I choose to enjoy natural scenery such as the smell of flowers, which helps me relax.

Errors: 'go to hiking' is incorrect — 'go hiking' uses the gerund after 'go'; 'natural sceneries' is uncountable or 'scenery' is used; 'smell of the flower' should be 'the smell of flowers'; 'which helped me relax' shifts tense inconsistently. Rule: use 'go' + gerund, use 'scenery' uncountable, use plural 'flowers' when general, and keep present tense 'helps' to match 'I choose'. Suggestion: use 'go hiking', 'natural scenery', 'the smell of flowers', and present tense 'helps'.

× I prefer landscapes in countryside because they have what I'm not exposed to in daily life.

✓ I prefer landscapes in the countryside because they have things I'm not exposed to in daily life.

Errors: missing article before 'countryside' — use 'the countryside'; 'have what I'm not exposed to' is unnatural; better 'have things I'm not exposed to'. Rule: some geographical nouns require 'the'; rephrase to natural collocation 'have things'. Suggestion: include 'the' and use 'things' or specify what those things are.

× There is wonderful nature such as fresh air, colorful flowers, toad trees, uh, which help me comb and also I love the uh, laid back atmosphere in countryside.

✓ There is wonderful nature such as fresh air, colorful flowers, and tall trees, which help me calm down, and I also love the laid-back atmosphere in the countryside.

Errors: 'toad trees' is likely a mispronunciation of 'tall trees'; 'help me comb' is incorrect — should be 'help me calm down'; missing commas and hyphen in 'laid-back'; missing article 'the' before 'countryside'. Rule: choose correct vocabulary ('tall' not 'toad'), verbs 'calm down' for relaxation, and use articles and hyphens correctly. Suggestion: replace with 'tall trees', 'calm down', use 'laid-back' and 'the countryside'.

× Therefore I love those.

✓ Therefore I love them.

Error: 'those' as a pronoun is acceptable but 'them' is more natural after referring to things previously mentioned; not strictly an article error but pronoun choice. Rule: use 'them' to refer to plural objects in general. Suggestion: use 'them' for smoother, more natural speech.

× I prefer visiting my own country.

✓ I prefer visiting my own country.

No grammatical error detected relevant to the provided list; sentence is acceptable. Explanation: 'my own country' is correct; no change needed.

× In terms of seasonal aspect, we have Four Seasons and each season has unique characteristic.

✓ In terms of seasons, we have four seasons and each season has a unique characteristic.

Errors: 'In terms of seasonal aspect' is awkward — 'In terms of seasons' is natural; 'Four Seasons' should be lowercase unless referring to a proper noun; 'unique characteristic' needs an article 'a'. Rule: use articles before singular countable nouns and natural phrasing. Suggestion: say 'we have four seasons' and 'a unique characteristic'.

× I love the spring the most especially and it's represented by national flower called cherry blossom and entering and graduation ceremony.

✓ I especially love spring the most, and it is represented by our national flower, the cherry blossom, and by school entrance and graduation ceremonies.

Errors: word order 'the spring the most especially' is awkward; missing articles 'the national flower called' needs commas and 'the cherry blossom'; 'entering and graduation ceremony' is ungrammatical — 'entrance and graduation ceremonies'. Rule: adverb placement ('especially' before what it modifies), use articles with named things, and pluralize 'ceremony' when general. Suggestion: 'I especially love spring the most' or simply 'I love spring the most, especially.'

× So every year I see the flower. I recall that.

✓ So every year I see the flowers; I remember that.

Errors: 'see the flower' suggests a single instance — better 'see the flowers' for recurring event; 'I recall that' is awkward in spoken context — 'I remember that' is more natural. Rule: use plural for habitual occurrences and choose natural verbs. Suggestion: 'every year I see the flowers' and 'I remember that'.