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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes I do taking pictures from different views.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

OK. Do you have another question?

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in our country because the views in our country can cost less money. The views on the other country will will will cost a large amount of money. I don't have enough money to travel abroad.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且語法正確,並擴展內容但控制在最多五句。可以用一句主題句直接回答,再加1-2句具體細節或原因,並使用連接詞使語句流暢。注意動詞形式(例如 use “I like taking photos of different views” 或 “I enjoy taking pictures from different viewpoints”)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often walk around my neighborhood to find interesting angles and contrasts, because changing the viewpoint makes ordinary scenes look more dramatic.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 這題回答沒有正面回應考官問題。應直接表明偏好(城市或鄉村),然後用一兩句具體理由支持。保持句子自然並使用連接詞如“because”或“so”。避免用短促或閃避的回應。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside offers open spaces and natural light that are great for photography. Also, quieter surroundings let me take my time to compose shots without distractions.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答有明確立場但表達重複且語法不夠自然。可先簡短回答,接著給出具體原因並避免重複詞語(如不要連續重複“will”)。可以提供一個例子說明為何國內景色更吸引你或方便你欣賞。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because traveling locally is much cheaper and I can visit more places without spending a lot. For example, I can take weekend trips to nearby mountains or lakes and still have time and money to explore them properly.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes I do taking pictures from different views.

Yes, I do take pictures of different views.

问题类型: 动词后接 -ing 形式使用错误。句中 “do taking” 不符合英语语法。一般在肯定答语中用助动词 do + 动词原形(do take)或直接用动名词(I enjoy taking),但不能把两者混用。建议在此情境使用简单现在时的肯定回答:"Yes, I do take pictures of different views." 或更自然的回答 "Yes, I take pictures of different views."。注意在 "pictures of" 中使用介词 of 来表达“……的照片”。

Sentence structure errors

× OK. Do you have another question?

(此句为考官的话,可保持原样)

问题类型: 句子结构错误 — 实际上这句由考官说出,不是学生回答,作为回应不需要更正。若用于学生回答,应更自然地说 "Okay, go ahead." 或 "Sure, what's the next question?"。本次对话中无需修改。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer views in our country because the views in our country can cost less money.

I prefer views in my country because they cost less money there.

问题类型: 代词使用不当。重复使用 "the views in our country" 冗长且代词使用不自然。应使用主格/宾格代词替代并调整结构。另外动词搭配也不自然:景点/观光不“cost”,应说 "cost less" 表示花费更少。改写为 "they cost less money there" 更简洁自然。建议使用 "my country" 而非 "our country"(取决于说话者与听者关系)。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× The views on the other country will will will cost a large amount of money.

The views in other countries will cost a large amount of money.

问题类型: 介词使用不当 和 其他错误。介词搭配应为 "in other country/countries" 或更常见 "in other countries"。句中重复了多个 "will"(冗余重复),只需一个情态助动词表示将来时。建议改为复数形式 "other countries",并使用单个 "will"。此外可更自然地说 "cost a lot of money"。

Present tense issue

× I don't have enough money to travel abroad.

I don't have enough money to travel abroad.

问题类型: 一般现在时使用 — 该句语法正确,无需更改。它正确使用了一般现在时表示当前状态。若要更礼貌/正式,可说 "I don't have enough money to travel abroad at the moment."。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
LargeBig; Abundant; Wide-reaching
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