Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I like take pictures of different views because it can make me remember lots of good memories and I can, uh, remember some good things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Well I prefer rural areas because it's more close to the nature and I like the views like breeze, mountain, hills and some trees. That is very amazing.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Uh, well, I prefer another countries because in our country the lot of the views are very similar and in other countries the culture, the views I never seen before.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有语法和用词问题,语句略重复且有停顿。需要改进动词形式、减少重复表达并用一到两句补充具体细节(如常拍的场景或用手机/相机)。使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve special memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountain scenes with my phone, which remind me of calm evenings and family trips.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确但存在语法和用词问题(如 "it's more close to the nature")。句子结构需要更自然,避免列举过多无连接词的名词,建议使用连接词并给出具体原因或比较。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are closer to nature and offer peaceful scenery. For instance, I enjoy the fresh breeze, rolling hills and wooded trails, which feel much calmer than crowded city streets.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 63.0Gợi ý: 回答能表达偏好但语法错误较多(复数/单数、词序),且表达模糊。建议改正语法并补充具体例子或原因,使用连接词解释为什么其他国家的景色更吸引人。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often feature landscapes and cultures I haven't experienced before. For example, I loved the unique architecture and coastal scenery when I visited Spain, which was very different from what I usually see at home.
× Definitely, I like take pictures of different views because it can make me remember lots of good memories and I can, uh, remember some good things.
✓ Definitely, I like taking pictures of different views because it can help me remember lots of good memories and I can remember some good things.
问题类型:动词后接 -ing 或不定式的用法错误(对应列表8)。原句中主语“like”后应该接动名词“taking”,而不是原形动词“take”。另外,短语“can make me remember”在此语境中更自然的表达是“can help me remember”,表示“能帮助我记住”。建议:在动词后根据习惯搭配选择动名词或不定式;遇到“like”通常用动名词(like doing);使用“help someone do/ help someone to do”均可,但“help me remember”更简洁自然。
× Well I prefer rural areas because it's more close to the nature and I like the views like breeze, mountain, hills and some trees. That is very amazing.
✓ Well, I prefer rural areas because they're closer to nature and I like views such as breezes, mountains, hills, and some trees. That is very amazing.
问题类型:介词和形容词形式错误(对应列表11 和 13)。“more close to the nature”不正确,应为“closer to nature”(“close”比较级为“closer”,且通常不加定冠词“the”与“nature”连用)。另外,“the views like breeze, mountain, hills and some trees”用法不自然,应使用“views such as”或“like”并且名词要作复数或加冠词:breezes, mountains, hills。建议:用“be closer to nature”;列举事物时保持名词数一致并用“such as/like”来引出示例。
× Uh, well, I prefer another countries because in our country the lot of the views are very similar and in other countries the culture, the views I never seen before.
✓ Uh, well, I prefer other countries because in our country a lot of the views are very similar, and in other countries there are cultures and views I have never seen before.
问题类型:代词和句子结构错误(对应列表12 和 26)。“another countries”不正确:another 用于可数单数,复数应使用“other countries”。“the lot of the views”应为“a lot of the views”或更自然的“many views”。此外“the culture, the views I never seen before”语法上缺助动词和关系词;应改为“there are cultures and views I have never seen before”或“the culture and views I have never seen before”。建议:注意“another”只用于单数,复数用“other”;使用完成时态“have never seen”表示至今未见过;句子中缺少“there are”或连接词来使结构完整。