Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and repetition; give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct small errors ("make pictures" → "take pictures"). Keep answer to 2–3 fluid sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I have wanted to be a professional photographer since childhood. For example, I often photograph mountains and rivers when I travel, which helps me practise composition and lighting.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and give a specific reason using linking words like "because" or "since". Avoid stuttering and repeating words. Use one supporting detail about what you like in rural areas.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I grew up there and feel very comfortable in natural settings. For example, I enjoy photographing quiet fields and traditional houses, which remind me of good childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Make the answer concise and precise: state preference, then give specific reasons (e.g., familiar culture, unique landscapes). Avoid filler words and correct grammar ("there are a lot of scenic places" instead of "there are lot of views").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the culture and landscapes, and Pakistan has many spectacular high mountains. For instance, I love photographing the Karakoram range because of its dramatic peaks and light.

× I like, uh, to take pictures, uh, as, uh, I want to, as I always want to become a professional, uh, uh, photographer from my childhood.

✓ I like taking pictures because I have always wanted to become a professional photographer since my childhood.

The original uses the infinitive 'to take' where the gerund 'taking' is more natural after 'like' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also 'want to become' repeated and 'from my childhood' is better as 'since my childhood' to indicate a starting point in time (preposition issue but addressed within natural correction). Suggestion: use gerunds after like and use 'since' for points in time that continue to the present.

× That's why I always love to, uh, make a pictures of lovely scenes, mountains and uh, different sceneries.

✓ That's why I always love to take pictures of lovely scenes, mountains, and different landscapes.

The phrase 'a pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove the article and use plural 'pictures' (Grammar Problem Type 22). Also 'make a pictures' is incorrect; collocation is 'take pictures'. 'Sceneries' is uncountable or unusual; 'landscapes' is a better noun.

× I always, uh, love to uh, prefer uh, ru rural areas as I, I have grown up uh, there and uh, my childhood uh has a great memories.

✓ I always prefer rural areas because I grew up there and my childhood holds great memories.

'Prefer' does not need 'love to' before it; 'love to prefer' is redundant. 'I have grown up there' should be simple past 'I grew up there' for a completed action (tense issue but corrected here). 'My childhood has a great memories' mixes singular verb with plural noun; use 'holds great memories' or 'I have great memories of my childhood' (Grammar Problem Type 12 for pronoun/possessive use and 22 for article/number issues). Suggestion: remove filler words, choose correct tense for past events, and match singular/plural forms.

× That's why I always used to prefer rural, rural areas.

✓ That's why I used to prefer rural areas.

The phrase 'always used to prefer' is redundant; 'used to' indicates habitual past action, so 'always' is unnecessary though not ungrammatical. Duplicate 'rural' should be removed. Use simple past habitual 'used to prefer' for past habits (Grammar Problem Type 5). Suggestion: avoid repetition and unnecessary adverbs when using 'used to'.

× in Pakistan there are lot of views in raised mountains.

✓ In Pakistan there are many views in the high mountains.

'Lot of' needs a determiner: 'a lot of' or better 'many' for countable 'views' (Grammar Problem Type 14). 'Raised mountains' is incorrect collocation; use 'high mountains' or 'mountainous areas'. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable plural and correct adjective-noun collocation.

× That's why I want to, I always prefer to, uh, views of my own country.

✓ That's why I always prefer the views of my own country.

The original mixes 'want to' and 'prefer to' with the noun 'views' incorrectly. 'Prefer' followed by a noun does not take 'to' in this structure. Use 'prefer the views of my own country' or 'prefer to view my own country' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Suggestion: decide between verb + to-infinitive ('prefer to visit') or verb + noun ('prefer the views').