Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms), and use linking words to organise details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific examples using linking words like “for example” or “such as.” Keep the answer to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy taking photographs of different views, especially natural scenes. For example, I often capture landscapes, birds and small animals because I love observing wildlife up close. I also like photographing interesting furniture and architectural details when I visit markets.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and verb forms, and provide a clear reason plus a brief contrast. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give one clear reason and, if relevant, a short comparison. Use linking words like “because,” “however,” or “also.” Keep it natural and concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer views of urban areas because I grew up and live in a city. For example, I enjoy city skylines, busy streets and modern architecture. However, I would be curious to explore rural views someday to experience different scenery.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (own country or other countries) and avoid vague or contradictory phrases. Use correct country names and grammar, give a specific reason and an example of what you like about other countries. Limit to 3–4 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “for instance.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy the dramatic landscapes and distinctive architecture abroad. For instance, I love Switzerland for its mountains and South Korea for its modern cityscapes. My country has pleasant scenery, but I find international views more varied and striking.

× I really like to take a pictures of different views because, uh, I like, uh, especially I like natures and I really take the pictures of it and also I prefer to take up pictures of uh, animals, birds and uh, beautiful furnitures.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views because I especially like nature, and I often take pictures of it; I also prefer taking pictures of animals, birds and beautiful furniture.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by a gerund when describing hobbies or preferences (like taking). 'a pictures' is incorrect: 'pictures' is plural so no 'a'. 'natures' should be the uncountable noun 'nature'. 'take the pictures of it' is awkward; use 'take pictures of it'. 'take up pictures' is incorrect; use 'prefer taking pictures'. 'furnitures' is uncountable: use 'furniture'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'like' and 'prefer', match countable/uncountable noun forms, and simplify phrases for clarity.

× So yes, I takes picture.

✓ So yes, I take pictures.

Subject 'I' requires the base verb form 'take', not 'takes' which is for third person singular. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match context. Suggestion: use 'I take' and pluralize nouns appropriately.

× I preferred views of urban areas because I grown up in urban areas.

✓ I prefer views of urban areas because I grew up in urban areas.

The student used 'preferred' (past) but context is general preference, so present 'prefer' is correct. 'I grown up' is ungrammatical; past tense of 'grow up' is 'grew up'. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual preferences and correct irregular past form 'grew'.

× Like I live in cities so I like the view of my city only and I haven't seen such villages so I don't know about what is in the rural areas.

✓ I live in a city so I like the view of my city, and I haven't seen many villages, so I don't know what is in rural areas.

Original mixes plural/singular and has awkward phrasing. 'Like I live in cities' -> 'I live in a city' or 'I live in cities'; choose one. 'the view of my city only' -> 'the view of my city' (only unnecessary). 'haven't seen such villages' is unnatural; use 'haven't seen many villages'. 'I don't know about what is in the rural areas' -> 'I don't know what is in rural areas'. Suggestions: maintain consistent number (singular/plural), avoid redundant words like 'about' after 'know', and use natural quantifiers.

× Yes, obviously I really like the view of the Switzerland country and I also like the view of South Korea and China.

✓ Yes, obviously I really like the views of Switzerland, and I also like the views of South Korea and China.

Do not use the definite article with country names like 'Switzerland' (not 'the Switzerland country'). Use 'views' plural to match multiple scenes. Also 'the view of South Korea and China' is better as 'the views of South Korea and China'. Suggestion: omit unnecessary 'the' and 'country', and pluralize 'view' when referring to multiple scenes.

× Uh, the views of my country is good, but I really like more uh, beautiful nature and uh, buildings.

✓ The views in my country are good, but I prefer more beautiful nature and buildings.

Subject-verb agreement: 'views' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. 'I really like more beautiful nature and buildings' is awkward; use 'I prefer' to compare and remove extra 'more' before 'beautiful nature' or say 'I prefer more beautiful natural scenery and buildings'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and use clearer comparative phrasing.

× So that is not really good in my country.

✓ So those kinds of views are not very common in my country.

Original sentence is vague and ungrammatical in context. 'So that is not really good in my country' mixes ideas. Better express meaning: that type of scenery is not common or well-developed. Suggestion: rephrase to clearly state the intended idea, using 'those kinds of views' or 'such scenery' and an appropriate verb like 'are not common'.