Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm, dùng số ít/ số nhiều đúng (picture -> pictures, view -> views), động từ chia đúng (make -> makes). Giảm tiếng nặng (umm) và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn; thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because, so). Bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn về tần suất hoặc địa điểm để phong phú nội dung.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenes because they make me feel peaceful. For example, I often photograph the sea at sunrise and sunset when the light is most beautiful. I usually go to the nearby beach twice a month to capture those moments.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (and -> in, smoothies -> skylines or streets, make -> makes). Tránh câu mơ hồ; tổ chức ý rõ ràng: đưa ra lựa chọn trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và giới thiệu ví dụ chính xác (for example, such as).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy modern architecture and lively streets. For example, I like visiting squares and open-air cafés where street performances happen; these places make the city feel vibrant and energetic.

Gợi ý: Giảm tiếng tạm (umm), sửa ngữ pháp (place -> places, make -> makes), hoàn thiện câu không để dang dở. Cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: phong cảnh, kiến trúc, ẩm thực) và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (because, so, therefore).

Ví dụ: I enjoy views in both my own country and abroad because I love discovering places I have never seen before. Exploring new landscapes and cultures excites me, and I especially enjoy comparing local architecture and food when I travel.

× I really like taking picture, especially nature view UMM because it make me feel more peaceful, more comfortable.

✓ I really like taking pictures, especially nature views, because they make me feel more peaceful and more comfortable.

'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because taking is a general activity involving multiple items. 'nature view' should be 'nature views' to match plural. 'it make' is subject-verb agreement: replace 'it' with 'they' to refer to 'nature views' and use 'make' -> 'make' remains but with 'they' as subject; here 'they make'. Remove filler 'UMM' and use commas to separate clauses; use 'and' instead of an extra comma before 'more comfortable'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general activities, ensure pronoun agrees with antecedent, remove fillers in speaking transcripts.

× I often take photos of the sea like the sunrise and sunset because it's very beautiful.

✓ I often take photos of the sea, such as the sunrise and sunset, because they are very beautiful.

'it's' (it is) incorrectly refers to plural concepts 'sunrise and sunset'; use plural pronoun 'they are'. Also 'like' is informal; 'such as' is clearer. Ensure pronoun number matches the nouns it refers to.

× I prefer views and urban areas because I enjoy the smoothies and modern architecture.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the atmospheres and modern architecture.

Original uses 'and' incorrectly: 'views and urban areas' is confusing; change to 'views in urban areas'. 'the smoothies' is incorrect; likely meant 'the smoothies' is wrong context—replace with 'the atmosphere(s)' or 'the shops/cafes' depending on meaning. Here 'atmospheres' fits. Ensure correct noun choice and preposition 'in' for location.

× For example I like being in forest square or on concerts in a coffee just about streets performance.

✓ For example, I like being in public squares, going to concerts, or having coffee while watching street performances.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Reordered and clarified: 'forest square' -> 'public squares' or 'parks/squares'; 'on concerts in a coffee' is incorrect prepositions and noun uses. Use parallel gerunds: 'being', 'going', 'having' and correct noun phrases 'coffee while watching street performances' to convey intended meaning.

× It make the city feel life.

✓ It makes the city feel alive.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It make' should be 'It makes' (third person singular). 'feel life' is incorrect collocation; use adjective 'alive' to describe the city. Suggest practice with verb forms and common adjective collocations.

× I prefer views in all countries because I enjoy visiting place that I have never been to before.

✓ I prefer views in all countries because I enjoy visiting places that I have never been to before.

Use plural 'places' to match general meaning. 'visiting place that I have never been to before' needs plural and correct relative clause. Preposition 'to' at end is acceptable but ensure plurality.

× Umm exploring any place umm exploring new space make me feel excited and I like learning about different culture, different scenery and.

✓ Exploring new places makes me feel excited, and I like learning about different cultures and seeing different scenery.

Remove fillers 'Umm'; ensure subject-verb agreement: 'exploring... makes' (singular gerund subject takes singular verb). Use plural 'places', 'cultures', and complete the list instead of ending with 'and.' Reorder to parallel structure: 'learning about different cultures and seeing different scenery.'