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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I really enjoy, especially when I travel to different country. I like capturing virus of a. Architectural styles, local food and natural landscape. Because it reflects different cultural. And it reminds me.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer. We use in urban areas because the atmosphere is more. Energy. For example, I enjoy the city skyline and the busy street with. Pretty coffee, fish. Which give me energy.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Definitely views in other country because it make me feel more fresh. For example, when I visit a new country, I will. I was fascinated by the different art styles. And landscapes. Which makes me traveling. More.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更连贯并完整表达观点,避免句子残缺和错误词汇。可以先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用一到两个具体细节支持。注意语法(复数、冠词)和词汇(如不要用“virus”误代“variety”或“views”)。使用连接词如“because”,“for example”使句子更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to other countries. For example, I often photograph architectural styles and local food because they reflect the culture of a place. This helps me remember my trips and notice subtle differences between regions.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答要完整且句子流畅,避免单词碎片。先直接给出偏好,然后用具体理由和例子支持。注意词汇选择(如“vibe”或“energy”代替零散的‘energy’),描述要具体且连贯,使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because the city atmosphere feels more energetic. For example, I enjoy photographing the skyline and busy streets with cafés and markets, because the activity and lights make the scenes lively and interesting.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 句子应更完整并保持时态一致。先给出明确回答,然后说明原因并举例。避免句子断裂和重复,使用连接词(例如“when”,“which”)并修正语法(如“make”应为“makes”或用复数结构)。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer views in other countries because they make me feel refreshed. When I visit a new country, I am fascinated by different art styles and landscapes, which makes traveling more exciting and inspiring.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, I really enjoy, especially when I travel to different country.

Yes, I really enjoy it, especially when I travel to different countries.

句子中缺少宾语“it”,且“country”应为复数“countries”,因为说的是泛指不同的国家。建议在动词 enjoy 后加上代词 it 作为宾语,并把 country 改为复数以保持泛指一致。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I like capturing virus of a. Architectural styles, local food and natural landscape.

I like capturing various aspects: architectural styles, local food and natural landscapes.

原句用词混乱(“virus of a”无意义),应使用表示多样的词汇如 various aspects,并将名词复数化(landscapes)以匹配多个景观。建议使用冒号列举,并用复数形式。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Because it reflects different cultural.

Because they reflect different cultures.

从句主语缺失且搭配不当。原句的 it 无明确指代,且 cultural 应为名词 cultures。改为复数 they 指代前文的 aspects/styles/food/landscapes,cultural 改为名词形式。

23: Sentence without a verb

× And it reminds me.

And it reminds me of the place and the people.

原句虽然有动词 reminds,但没有完整的宾语内容,含义不明确。补充宾语以使句子完整并表意清楚。

26: Sentence structure errors

× I prefer. We use in urban areas because the atmosphere is more. Energy.

I prefer taking photos in urban areas because the atmosphere is more energetic.

原句断断续续,结构不完整。将片段合并,使用动名词短语 taking photos 作为宾语,“more energetic”作为形容词短语描述 atmosphere。避免把 energy 当形容词误用。

26: Sentence structure errors

× For example, I enjoy the city skyline and the busy street with. Pretty coffee, fish.

For example, I enjoy the city skyline and busy streets with pretty cafes and food stalls.

原句断句错误且词不达意。“pretty coffee, fish”不合逻辑,应为 cafes(咖啡馆)和 food stalls(小吃摊)或 other food-related words,使语义连贯并与前文 plural 一致。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Which give me energy.

Which give me energy.

句子本身语法正确,但需注意与先行词复数一致。这里保持 give(与复数先行词 streets/cafes 等一致)。说明:若先行词是单数则应用 gives。

6: Present tense issue

× Definitely views in other country because it make me feel more fresh.

Definitely views in other countries because they make me feel fresher.

country 应为复数 countries;主语复数需用动词 make(而非 make 的三单 makes),并用比较级 fresher 更自然地表达“更有新鲜感”。同时将 it 改为 they 指代复数名词。

26: Sentence structure errors

× For example, when I visit a new country, I will. I was fascinated by the different art styles. And landscapes.

For example, when I visit a new country, I am fascinated by the different art styles and landscapes.

原句时态和结构混乱。问题在于不应在同一句使用 will 然后断开改用过去时。保持现在时或现在一般时更自然:当我访问新国家时(一般情况)用 I am fascinated 或 I become fascinated。将碎片合并成一个完整句子并用并列连接 art styles and landscapes。

6: Present tense issue

× Which makes me traveling. More.

Which makes me want to travel more.

原句中 makes 的宾语不完整,应加上不定式 want to travel 来表示“让我更想旅行”。traveling(动名词)在此处不合适,需要不定式结构。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
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