Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Mention time and place correctly and use past tense forms for completed trips.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially when I travel. For example, on a recent trip to Mussoorie I took many photos of rivers and mountains, and I also captured the sunrise and sunset, which looked spectacular.

Gợi ý: Give a clear position and explain with specific contrasting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'urban nightlife', 'historical charm') and keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer both. Urban areas attract me because the nightlife and modern architecture create a lively atmosphere, whereas rural areas appeal to me for their peaceful landscapes and historical charm.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and structure your response with a clear topic sentence plus contrasting details using linking words (e.g., 'on the other hand'). Be specific about what you like (examples of landmarks or styles) and use correct grammar (e.g., 'there are impressive skyscrapers' rather than 'huge buildings caught my attention').

Ví dụ: I appreciate views in both. At home, I enjoy the historical charm of old forts and temples, while abroad I like modern skylines and impressive skyscrapers, which offer a very different visual experience.

× Recently I'm uh, trip I am visited Mussoorie uh, during this trip I'm taking a lot of pictures of rivers, mountains, sunrise, sunset and also.

✓ Recently I went on a trip; I visited Mussoorie. During this trip I took a lot of pictures of rivers, mountains, sunrises, and sunsets.

The original mixes present continuous and past forms incorrectly for a completed trip. Use simple past for completed actions (went, visited, took). Also pluralize 'sunrise/sunset' to match 'a lot of pictures'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense (simple past) when describing a finished trip.

× especially when I'm on my trip.

✓ especially when I'm on a trip.

'My trip' is odd here when speaking generally; 'a trip' fits better. The present continuous 'I'm on' is acceptable if describing ongoing trips, but keep article consistency. Suggestion: use 'a trip' for general statements.

× and also.

✓ and so on.

The fragment 'and also.' is incomplete and leaves the sentence hanging. Replace with 'and so on' or complete the list (for example, 'and so on' or 'and other scenery'). Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; complete the thought.

× I prefer both because in urban areas, uh, the nightlife gives you the different vibes like peace and which is really caught my attention and in rural areas which gives the historical attention, historical vibes.

✓ I prefer both because in urban areas the nightlife gives different vibes, such as excitement, which really catches my attention, and rural areas offer historical charm and atmosphere.

Multiple issues: awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms. 'Gives you the different vibes like peace and which is really caught my attention' is ungrammatical. 'Which is really caught my attention' uses passive incorrectly; use active 'which really catches my attention'. 'Rural areas which gives' has subject-verb disagreement; use 'rural areas offer'. Suggestion: simplify and separate clauses, ensure verbs agree with subjects and use active voice.

× I prefer both. In my country, uh, it has uh, own historical charm and umm, historical charm.

✓ I prefer both. In my country, it has its own historical charm.

Redundant phrase 'own historical charm and historical charm' and incorrect pronoun use. Use 'its own' to refer to 'my country'. Keep present simple for general truths. Suggestion: remove repetition and use correct possessive pronoun.

× And in other countries there are nightlife and uh, huge buildings caught my attention.

✓ In other countries, the nightlife and the huge buildings catch my attention.

'There are nightlife' is incorrect because 'nightlife' is uncountable and does not pair with 'there are' in this way. Also 'caught my attention' mixes past with present preference; use present simple 'catch' to express general preference. Suggestion: use 'the nightlife' and 'catch my attention' for habitual statements and ensure verb tense matches general preference.