Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response natural, direct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid grammatical errors, and give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because natural landscapes make me feel happier and more relaxed. For example, I often take photos of mountains and rivers when I hike, which helps me remember the peaceful moments.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear preference, then explain with specific reasons and a brief example. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “prefer,” “rural,” “urban,” “open fields,” “friendly atmosphere”) and linking words like “because” or “so.” Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because there are open fields and fresh air, and the atmosphere feels more relaxed. For instance, I like walking through farming villages where I can see wide landscapes and friendly local markets.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical statement of preference and a reasonable, respectful reason. Avoid unclear or inappropriate phrasing. Provide a specific example or comparison and use linking words such as “because” or “although.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different cultures and well-maintained public spaces. For example, when I visited Japan, I appreciated the clean parks and carefully designed gardens, which differed from the crowded parks at home.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures or different views because their beauty of nature may mean happy but less and cheerful.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because the beauty of nature makes me happy and cheerful.

The sentence misuses the pronoun 'their' and has awkward noun phrases. 'Different views' is better followed by 'of' not 'or'. 'Their beauty of nature' is incorrect; use 'the beauty of nature' (definite article + noun) and an active verb: 'makes me happy and cheerful'. Also replace 'may mean happy but less and cheerful' with 'makes me happy and cheerful' for clarity and correct verb use.

× I'm referred to in rural areas than urban areas because we can see many forums and open fees in rural areas and begin enjoying people's atmosphere in real areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because we can see many farms and open fields in rural areas and enjoy the relaxed atmosphere.

Multiple errors: 'I'm referred to' is wrong; should be 'I prefer'. The correct preposition for comparison is 'prefer X to Y'. 'Forums and open fees' are incorrect words; likely 'farms and open fields'. 'Begin enjoying people's atmosphere in real areas' is unclear; better 'enjoy the relaxed atmosphere'. Use consistent simple present tense for preferences.

× I'm verbal pills in other countries than my own country because my own country has many, many people's pure bad health situation is really bad.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries to my own because the public health situation in my country is quite poor.

The original sentence contains many incorrect words and pronoun misuse: 'I'm verbal pills' makes no sense; replace with 'I prefer visiting'. Use the comparative structure 'prefer X to Y'. 'Many, many people's pure bad health situation is really bad' is ungrammatical and redundant; concise and correct phrasing is 'the public health situation in my country is quite poor'. This fixes word choice, redundancy, and overall sentence clarity.