Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng cơ bản, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và nối ý hợp lý. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (picture → pictures, view → views, a photograph → photographing hoặc a photograph of a landscape). (2) Viết câu chủ đề ngắn gọn trước, sau đó thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ tối đa 2 câu. (3) Dùng từ vựng chính xác thay vì từ không phù hợp (preserve → preserve memories, memorize → remember, oblique felt → how I felt). (4) Dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (so, because, for example).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes so I can remember how I felt in that place.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện trật tự câu và chính tả, dùng cụm từ phù hợp và chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn (I prefer...). (2) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (I’m more into → I prefer, Greenfield → green fields, quarry first → quarries, help → helps, after busy week → after a busy week). (3) Thêm một mốc hoặc so sánh ngắn để làm rõ lý do (compared to cities). (4) Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 và dùng liên từ như because, so, which).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and natural than cityscapes. For example, I enjoy looking at green fields and small quarries, which help me relax after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện sự rõ ràng và sửa lỗi nghiêm trọng về ngữ pháp, từ vựng và mạch ý. Cụ thể: (1) Tránh bắt đầu bằng cảm thán không cần thiết; trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề (I prefer...). (2) Sửa cấu trúc so sánh (prefer ... to ...). (3) Dùng lý do cụ thể và chính xác (familiarity, cultural connection, landscapes). (4) Loại bỏ các từ không rõ nghĩa (a sign of, P4) và thay bằng mô tả rõ ràng. (5) Thêm 1 câu ví dụ ngắn để minh họa.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country to those in other countries because I feel a strong cultural connection and I’m more familiar with the landscapes. For example, local countryside scenes remind me of home and family memories.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different view because it helps me preserve, memorize and I can look at them later.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories and I can look at them later.

Use the gerund 'taking' correctly with the plural count noun 'pictures' and plural 'views' (Grammar problem type 1 Singular and plural issue). Replace 'preserve, memorize' with 'preserve memories' for natural collocation and subject-verb agreement: 'they help' refers to 'pictures'. Also use a single coordinated clause 'preserve memories and I can look at them later' for clarity.

× For example when I travel a photograph landscape so I can remember how oblique felt.

✓ For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes so I can remember how I felt.

Original sentence has several structure problems (Grammar problem type 26 Sentence structure errors): missing commas, incorrect word order, wrong noun form 'photograph' used as a verb without proper positioning, 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes', and 'oblique' is incorrect word choice for feelings. Replace with 'how I felt' to express memory of emotions.

× Well I more into the view in rural areas because they feel more peaceful and natural.

✓ Well, I'm more into views in rural areas because they feel more peaceful and natural.

Missing verb 'am' (subject-verb omission related to sentence structure) and incorrect noun number: use 'views' plural. 'More into' should be 'more into views' as a phrase. This fits Grammar problem type 11 Incorrect use of prepositions and 1 Singular and plural issue; primary correction is inserting 'am' and pluralizing 'views'.

× For example I like seeing Greenfield and quarry first which help me relax after busy week.

✓ For example, I like seeing green fields and quarries first, which help me relax after a busy week.

Proper nouns/common nouns capitalization and pluralization: use plural 'green fields' and 'quarries' if referring to types of places. Add article 'a' before 'busy week'. 'Which help' agrees with plural subject. This addresses Grammar problem type 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 1 Singular and plural issue.

× Wow, it's quite difficult to answers but I think I'm going to views in my country than other ones because it's made me a sign of. P4 and quite beauty.

✓ Wow, it's quite difficult to answer, but I think I prefer views in my country to those in other countries because they are meaningful to me and quite beautiful.

Multiple errors: 'answers' should be infinitive 'answer' (Grammar problem type 26 Sentence structure errors), 'I'm going to views' is ungrammatical—use 'I prefer views in my country to those in other countries' (comparison structure). 'It's made me a sign of. P4 and quite beauty.' is unintelligible; interpret as 'they are meaningful to me and quite beautiful.' This fixes tense, comparison, and adjective use (Grammar problem types 6 Present tense issue, 25 Comparative and superlative errors, and 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).