Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives examples, but there are several grammatical and word-choice errors and some awkward phrasing. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Improve accuracy: replace incorrect words (e.g., “mess”, “combination”, “lightning”) with correct vocabulary, and tighten sentence structure. Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details connected with linking words (for example, “for example”, “because”, “so”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me capture memories and notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to practice composition and lighting, and I take landscape photos while travelling to preserve the atmosphere of a place.

Gợi ý: Good clear opinion with supporting reasons and example. Improve accuracy of vocabulary (use “greenery” not “greeny”, “urban landscapes often lack” with correct plural/agreement). Keep sentences natural and varied with linking words like “however” or “whereas”.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer open space, greenery, and a sense of tranquility that urban landscapes often lack. For example, watching the sunrise over fields or mountains helps me relax and recharge, whereas city views can be noisy and crowded.

Gợi ý: Answer is personal and coherent with reasons, but contains some vocabulary errors and small coherence issues (“fjord” plural and “deserts” vs “desserts”). Improve precision and reduce redundancy; use linking words (“however”, “although”) to contrast preferences. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and recall personal memories of family trips to the coast and mountain sunsets. The scenery also reflects my cultural heritage and the changing seasons, which I find comforting. However, I enjoy views abroad when they offer something different, such as dramatic fjords or vast deserts.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture meaningful memories and notice details I might otherwise mess.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture meaningful memories and notice details I might otherwise miss.

The verb 'mess' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'miss' (base form). This is not a present participle issue but a wrong verb choice. Use 'miss' to mean fail to notice; keep the modal construction 'might otherwise miss'. Suggestion: use common collocations: 'miss details'.

× For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to practice combination and lightning, and I take landscape photos when I travel to preserve the atmosphere of a place.

✓ For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to practice composition and lighting, and I take landscape photos when I travel to preserve the atmosphere of a place.

'Combination' and 'lightning' are incorrect word choices. The correct photographic terms are 'composition' (arrangement of elements) and 'lighting' (light in a scene). Replace the words to match intended meaning. Suggestion: learn common photography vocabulary: 'composition', 'lighting'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because they offer open space, greeny, and a sense of tranquility that urban landscape often lack.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they offer open space, greenery, and a sense of tranquility that urban landscapes often lack.

'Greeny' is not an English noun; the correct noun is 'greenery'. Also 'urban landscape' should be plural 'urban landscapes' to match 'they' and generalize. Ensure noun forms and subject-verb agreement ('landscapes ... lack'). Suggestion: use 'greenery' and match plurality between subject and verb.

× For example, watching the sunrise over fields or mountains helps me relax and recharge, whereas city views tend to be noisy and crowded despite their convenience.

✓ For example, watching the sunrise over fields or mountains helps me relax and recharge, whereas city views tend to be noisy and crowded despite their convenience.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present participle 'watching' correctly as a noun (gerund) subject phrase. Keep as is.

× I generally prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and bring back personal memories such as family trips to the coast and mountain sunsets.

✓ I generally prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and bring back personal memories, such as family trips to the coast and mountain sunsets.

Sentence is correct but adding a comma before 'such as' improves clarity. No grammatical error type from list applies beyond punctuation. Suggest adding comma for readability.

× The scenery here also reflects my cultural heritage and the changing seasons, which I find comforting.

✓ The scenery here also reflects my cultural heritage and the changing seasons, which I find comforting.

Sentence is correct as written; no grammatical correction needed. It properly uses adjectives and clauses. Keep as is.

× But I do enjoy views abroad when they offer something different like dramatic fjord or desserts.

✓ But I do enjoy views abroad when they offer something different, like dramatic fjords or deserts.

Two word-choice errors: 'fjord' should be plural 'fjords' to match 'like dramatic fjords', and 'desserts' (sweet food) is incorrect for dry landscapes; the correct word is 'deserts'. Add a comma before 'like' for clarity. Suggestion: check spelling and pluralization: 'fjord'->'fjords', 'desert' not 'dessert'.