Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够直接、重复且有许多填充词，句子结构混乱。建议：1) 以直接句开头表明观点（比如“I don’t really enjoy taking photos of views.”）。2) 减少“uh/um”等填充词，用简洁的原因句补充（例如“because I find it time-consuming and my photos often don’t turn out well”）。3) 使用连接词使原因更连贯（for example / therefore / so）。4) 控制在最多5句内，避免不必要重复。

Ví dụ: I don’t really enjoy taking photos of views because I find it time-consuming. For example, I often struggle to get the composition right, so my pictures don’t turn out as I expect.

Gợi ý: 回答较直接但用词和语法有小错误，句子可以更自然流畅。建议：1) 以完整句表达观点（“I prefer rural areas.”）。2) 用because后接清晰原因并用连接词扩展（for example / so / which helps me）。3) 修改口语缩写和语法（e.g. “I want to”改为“I want to”完整形式）。4) 可加入具体细节说明如何放松（walking, fresh air）。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I work in the city and want to relax in a quieter environment. For example, I enjoy walking among fields and breathing fresh air, which helps me de-stress.

Gợi ý: 回答思路清晰且有对比，但时态使用和表达可更自然。建议：1) 使用正确时态和更自然的条件句（e.g. “When I was 18, I preferred…”）。2) 用because后接具体原因并可加入连接词（however / now / so）。3) 控制句子数并加入一两句具体例子（which countries or sights）。

Ví dụ: When I was 18, I preferred visiting places in my own country because there was so much I hadn’t seen. However, now at 28 I’d like to travel abroad to experience different cultures and see famous landmarks in other countries.

× many persons

✓ many people

“persons”在口语和大多数书面语中很生硬，表示“许多人”应使用“people”。另外在该句中需用可数复数形式表示泛指人群，使用“many people”更自然。

× to uh, taking photos when they visited many cities

✓ to take photos when they visit many cities

在动词不定式结构中应使用不定式“to take”而不是“to taking”。另外保持时态一致，若为一般情况应使用一般现在时“visit”，表示习惯性行为。

× but uh, my photo always TRA trouble.

✓ but my photos always have trouble / but my photos always turn out poorly

原句结构混乱且“TRA”并非正确词汇。若想表达“我的照片经常出问题”可用“my photos always have trouble”或更自然的被动/结果表达“my photos always turn out poorly”。建议使用完整主谓结构并改为复数“photos”。（“have trouble”可后接动名词说明问题，如“have trouble looking good”）

× I'm working in city so I wanna to relax in rural areas.

✓ I work in the city so I want to relax in rural areas.

此处描述职业或常态应使用一般现在时“I work”而不是进行时“I'm working”。此外“wanna to”是错误搭配，口语缩写“wanna”后不加“to”；正式写法使用“want to”。“city”前需加定冠词“the city”。说明：使用一般现在时表达常态，and 修正不定式用法。

× If I'm 18 I will choose own country because I never saw them all,

✓ If I were 18, I would choose my own country because I haven't seen it all.

这是与现在事实相反的虚拟条件句，应使用过去式或虚拟式“If I were 18, I would...”。此外“choose own country”缺少物主代词，应为“my own country”。“never saw them all”中的“them”指代不明且时态不正确，应使用现在完成时“I haven't seen it all”来表示到目前为止未全部看过。

× but now I'm 28 so I'd like to see other countries.

✓ but now I'm 28, so I'd like to see other countries.

句子本身语法基本正确，仅需添加逗号分隔从句以改善流畅度。此句使用“would like”表达愿望，适合现在的情境。