Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. Or what do you mean views or angles?
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I do prefer views in rural areas especially because of the nature because I'm more into nature vibes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I really do wish to go in other countries to, uh, see more views and yeah, to explore more views. Well, I don't have enough money, so I can, I can, maybe I can just, uh.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Be direct and avoid asking the examiner for clarification unless necessary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside horizons because I like capturing contrasts in light and texture. Also, I try different angles to make ordinary scenes look more interesting.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid repeating words or phrases.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I love being surrounded by natural scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and forests since they offer peaceful atmospheres and diverse colors, especially at sunrise.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and concisely with one clear reason and, if appropriate, a brief example. Avoid filler words and hesitation. If mentioning a limitation (like money), state how you cope (e.g., virtual tours, local travel) to complete the response coherently.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different landscapes and cultures. However, since I can't travel much at the moment, I explore foreign scenery through travel documentaries and online photo forums to learn about new places.
× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. Or what do you mean views or angles?
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. Do you mean views or angles?
Two issues: unnecessary do-support for simple present affirmation and sentence structure. In normal affirmative simple present, 'I like' is correct rather than 'I do like' (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue). Also the second part is a clarification question that should be one direct question: 'Do you mean views or angles?' (Grammar Problem Type 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: use simple present for habitual preferences and form direct questions with subject-verb inversion. Note: Only corrected issues that match the provided problem types.
× I do prefer views in rural areas especially because of the nature because I'm more into nature vibes.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas, especially because of the natural scenery, since I like nature vibes.
Use simple present 'I prefer' rather than 'I do prefer' for stating a general preference (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue). Also 'the nature' is incorrect article use; use 'natural scenery' or 'nature' without 'the' (Grammar Problem Type 22: Article errors). Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for habitual preferences and use 'natural scenery' or simply 'nature' to sound natural.
× I really do wish to go in other countries to, uh, see more views and yeah, to explore more views.
✓ I really want to go to other countries to see more views and to explore more.
'Wish to go' is grammatical but sounds formal/inappropriate for a simple desire; 'want to go' is more natural (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue). Preposition error: use 'go to other countries' not 'go in other countries' (Grammar Problem Type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Also avoid repeating 'views'; use 'explore more' for concision (Grammar Problem Type 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: Use 'want to go to' and remove redundant phrases. Note: only corrected issues that match the provided problem types.
× Well, I don't have enough money, so I can, I can, maybe I can just, uh.
✓ Well, I don't have enough money, so maybe I can't go right now.
The original is fragmented and repetitive. The phrase 'so I can, I can, maybe I can just' is unfinished and confusing; replace with a clear result clause 'so maybe I can't go right now' (Grammar Problem Type 26: Sentence structure errors). Also this maintains present tense/modal meaning (Grammar Problem Type 4: Modal verb usage) by using 'can't' to express inability. Suggestion: avoid filler repetitions and complete the thought with a clear modal verb construction.