Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words briefly to connect ideas. Also correct small grammar slips (e.g., “I prefer taking photos of natural scenery” rather than “take some photos from natural beauties”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing natural landscapes because my hometown in Turkey is famous for its scenic beauty. For example, I often take pictures of coastal cliffs and pine forests when I visit nearby parks, which helps me capture different moods and lighting.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct topic sentence, then provide two specific reasons and one concrete example. Fix grammar (use “prefer taking photos in rural areas” and avoid trailing phrases). Use a linking word like “because” and “for example” to make the answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking photos in rural areas because they offer a wider variety of scenes and everyday activities. For example, I enjoy photographing farmers working in fields and the local livestock, which gives my pictures a more authentic and lively feel.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, slightly shorten the response to avoid redundancy, add a specific example for each preference, and use a linking phrase such as “on the other hand” to show contrast explicitly.

Ví dụ: I like both. In my country I enjoy photographing traditional villages and colorful festivals—for instance, I recently took photos of a village market—because they show local life. On the other hand, when I travel abroad I focus on modern architecture and city streets, which give me fresh perspectives and ideas.

× This is one of my favorites like taking pictures of different views, I like different landscapes and also I prefer to take some photos from natural beauties.

✓ This is one of my favorite hobbies: taking pictures of different views. I like various landscapes, and I also prefer to take photos of natural beauty.

The original sentence misuses 'favorites' (plural) and 'like' awkwardly together; 'favorite' as an adjective modifies 'hobby'. 'Taking pictures of different views' functions as a noun phrase (hobby) and should be linked clearly. 'Different' repeated and 'natural beauties' are awkward; use 'various landscapes' and 'natural beauty' (uncountable) instead. Also improve sentence structure by splitting into two sentences and using 'of' rather than 'from'.

× And I'm from a city in Turkey which is famous with natural natural.

✓ I am from a city in Turkey that is famous for its natural beauty.

The phrase 'famous with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' when indicating reason (famous for). 'Natural natural' is a repetition and ungrammatical; use 'natural beauty' as the correct noun phrase. 'Which' can be used, but 'that' is more natural here; also include 'its' to refer to the city's characteristic.

× I prefer take photos in rural areas because in there there are too many different views.

✓ I prefer taking photos in rural areas because there are so many different views there.

After 'prefer' when referring to an activity, use the -ing form: 'prefer taking'. The original places 'in there' incorrectly; the typical order is 'there are ... there' or better 'there are ... in rural areas'. Also 'too many' can imply excess; 'so many' is more neutral and appropriate here.

× I mean people do too many different things in their daily life and also there could be some animals or.

✓ I mean people do many different things in their daily lives, and there may also be some animals.

'Too many' again suggests excessive; 'many' is more suitable. 'Daily life' should be pluralized to 'daily lives' when referring to people generally. 'There could be some animals or' is incomplete and ungrammatical; replace with 'there may also be some animals' to complete the idea. Use 'may' or 'may also' as a modal to express possibility.