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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely, because taking pictures can capture the beautiful scenery. Uh, for example, I always taking photos to remember the journey and share them on my social media when I have a trip.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in rural areas because nature has endured us with spectacular scenery. For example, I always climb mountains to relieve my bad mood from my work and daily life.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer wheels in my own country. As well known, China is a big city which has a variety of different scenery. For example, we have high mountains, long coastals and big.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然但有语法和用词错误,信息略重复。建议:1) 注意动词形式(如“I always take photos”),2) 删除多余填充词(如“Uh”),3) 在主题句后用一到两句具体细节支持并用连接词衔接,例如说明拍照的目的或最喜欢拍的题材。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me remember special moments and scenery. For example, I always take landscape shots when I travel, and then I share the best ones on my social media so friends can see my trips.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 内容表达有想法但句子不够地道且有用词错误。建议:1) 使用更自然的表达(如“nature offers”而非“endured us”),2) 增加连接词使句子流畅(例如“because... so...”),3) 提供更具体的例子(例如描述一次登山的体验或具体景色)。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because nature offers more peaceful and spectacular scenery. For example, I often climb nearby mountains to clear my mind after a stressful week, and I enjoy the quiet trails and wide vistas at the summit.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答存在严重表达和内容错误。建议:1) 修正词汇错误(如将“wheels”改为“views”或“scenery”),2) 句子要准确简洁(例如“China has diverse landscapes”),3) 提供具体细节并避免句子未完成,4) 使用连接词增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: I prefer the scenery in my own country because China has very diverse landscapes. For example, we have tall mountains in the west, long coastlines in the east, and many historic cities, so I can see very different views without traveling abroad.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, absolutely, because taking pictures can capture the beautiful scenery. Uh, for example, I always taking photos to remember the journey and share them on my social media when I have a trip.

Yes, absolutely, because taking pictures can capture the beautiful scenery. For example, I always take photos to remember the journey and share them on my social media when I have a trip.

原句“I always taking photos”中动词形式错误。動詞在此作为一般现在时的谓语,应使用动词原形(第三人称单数除外加-s),所以应改为“I always take photos”。建议:陈述习惯动作时使用一般现在时(例如:I take, he goes)。

Incorrect use of verbs / Word choice (treated as 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)

× I prefer views in rural areas because nature has endured us with spectacular scenery.

I prefer views in rural areas because nature has endowed us with spectacular scenery.

这里原句用词错误:动词“endured”意思是“忍受”,与句意不符。正确应使用“endowed”表示“赋予、赐予”。建议:注意近义词区别,遇到不确定的动词可查词典或替换为更常用表达,如“nature gives us”或“nature offers us”。(按照题目要求归类为与形容或词汇使用相关的问题,提供更正。)

Verb form / Article and word choice (treated as 14 Incorrect use of quantifiers)

× I prefer wheels in my own country. As well known, China is a big city which has a variety of different scenery. For example, we have high mountains, long coastals and big.

I prefer views in my own country. As is well known, China is a big country which has a variety of different scenery. For example, we have high mountains, long coastlines and large plains.

该句存在多处错误:1)“wheels”显然是拼写或用词错误,应为“views”。2)“As well known”缺少被动结构,正确表达为“As is well known”。3)“big city”与后文描述不符,且应为“country”(国家),所以改为“big country”。4)“long coastals”用词错误,应为“long coastlines”(海岸线)。5)句末“and big.”不完整,应改为具体名词,如“large plains”。建议:检查单词拼写与词义,确保名词与上下文一致;使用常见搭配(e.g. coastlines, plains)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
BeautifulAttractive
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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