Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Focus on correct tense and singular/plural forms (e.g., "memories" vs "a memory").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I keep landscape photos in an online gallery, and when I look at them months later, they remind me of the place and the feelings I had.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise preference sentence, then add one or two specific reasons linked logically. Correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer rural areas"), use countable/uncountable forms properly, and avoid unclear words like "Husky" here.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and less polluted. For instance, I like photographs of fields and forests since the quiet atmosphere and clean air make these scenes more relaxing than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct tense and sentence structure. Name the country clearly and give two specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., "for example", "because") while avoiding vague or fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, especially Nepal, because of its dramatic mountains and scenic hill stations. For example, photos of the Himalayas and ancient temples often feel peaceful and inspiring, which is why I enjoy them more than typical urban scenery.

× I like to take a picture of different views because that will create a memories.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views because they create memories.

The original has an article error and number mismatch. 'a memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural and does not take 'a'. Replace 'a memories' with 'memories' and change 'that will create' to 'they create' for natural present-tense explanation and subject agreement.

× Once we have in a gallery after a long period of Campbell recall that thing again, because that will very helpful to make the things alive or.

✓ Once they are in a gallery, after a long period we can recall those moments again because they are very helpful in making memories feel alive.

This sentence has multiple structure and word-choice errors. 'Once we have in a gallery' lacks an object; changed to 'Once they are in a gallery'. 'Campbell' is likely a misused word and removed. 'Recall that thing again' becomes 'we can recall those moments again'. 'that will very helpful to make the things alive' corrected to 'they are very helpful in making memories feel alive' for correct verb forms and prepositions.

× I like I like to prefer the views of rural area because that is very peaceful environment, very calm in nature, no noise, everything is a silent and the nature is not polluted that much as compared to urban because there is always a vibrant Husky.

✓ I prefer the views of rural areas because they are very peaceful and calm, with little noise and much less pollution compared to urban areas.

Original repeats phrases and uses incorrect noun forms and articles: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' for a general statement; 'a silent' is incorrect adjective use; 'the nature is not polluted that much' is awkward; 'vibrant Husky' is nonsensical and removed. The corrected sentence uses present tense consistently and fixes article and adjective usage.

× I used to prefer the views of other country that is Nepal because there is lots of mountain and hill stations.

✓ I prefer the views of another country, Nepal, because there are lots of mountains and hill stations.

'Used to prefer' implies a past habit but the speaker intends a general preference, so use present 'prefer'. 'Other country' should be 'another country' and 'there is lots of mountain' has number and verb agreement errors; use 'there are lots of mountains'.

× Are there many temples that will heal our souls to by maintaining the peaceful involvement?

✓ There are many temples that can heal our souls by maintaining a peaceful atmosphere.

The original begins with a question form 'Are there' but context suggests a statement. 'That will heal our souls to by maintaining the peaceful involvement' has incorrect pronoun and preposition use. 'Can heal our souls' is more natural; 'by maintaining a peaceful atmosphere' corrects preposition and noun choice.

× All these things that will make Nepal.

✓ All these things make Nepal special.

Sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear predicate. 'That will make Nepal' needs an object or complement; adding 'special' completes the idea and corrects structure.